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4/14/2017 c1 ConnieN
Angst? How about super angst!
6/22/2014 c1 dpdp
Sweet but such a sad sad goodbye.
6/20/2014 c1 EAC
Surely there's more to come? Please ,,,,
Angst, love and loss - where's the next chapter?
6/20/2014 c1 6Athena121
Wow...very sweet and sad! One quick question, are there two kids or three? Because there's Jacob, Martha and Samantha, and I can't decide if Little Samantha is a nickname for Martha or a baby sister younger than these two.
6/20/2014 c1 vcm
Wow. What a downer! Well written, but too sad.
6/20/2014 c1 70BettyHall223
How terribly sad. It would be great if you'd write more and explain what happened. Please?
6/20/2014 c1 Smiffy11052
So sad. Love your writing. Could there be more to this please
6/20/2014 c1 mmkbrook
My first inclination was not to read this. This is heart rending. Don't know where you can go with this as it looks like the end has been written.
6/20/2014 c1 cyced
you're so mean- the poor carter o'neill household :( great writer but really mean
6/20/2014 c1 10PatriciaS
That is a good, gut wrenching one shot that can stand alone as you say. ... But I have to say it :) as a greedy reader ... asks for more... for the questions to be answered. :) Thanks for sharing and carry on writing whatever you muse asks you too.
6/20/2014 c1 LadyMo
Wow very powerful. If I read the last line right it seems that little Jacob was not sure his father would be back alive. To know that at age 6 is something I cannot describe.
6/20/2014 c1 robinbishop1231
How can you get so much gut wrenching stuff into 700 words? Good job.
6/20/2014 c1 67LAIsobel
Well you had me crying in the middle of a shopping mall. Damn pregnancy hormones!

Somehow the last paragraph was a bit different. No hope in there in the eyes of a little boy... it didn't fit in there to me. But that could be just my strange emotional self now...

I would like to know what happened. Where is she... where is he going... stuff like that. Like a peice of the story is missing...

Sorry it's been a while since I left a review.

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