
6/3/2021 c1 anonehmoose
From the summary, it sounded interesting but it was difficult to read. The writing style is just a little too chaotic that it takes away from the story. I know it’s been years since you uploaded and updated this but if you ever decide to revise and edit this, I would love to read this and give it a try.
From the summary, it sounded interesting but it was difficult to read. The writing style is just a little too chaotic that it takes away from the story. I know it’s been years since you uploaded and updated this but if you ever decide to revise and edit this, I would love to read this and give it a try.
5/22/2020 c3 Guest
I too, agree that this is poorly written.
I too, agree that this is poorly written.
6/17/2017 c1 Fairys4life
You mean little blue guy with the fleek eyebrows?!
You mean little blue guy with the fleek eyebrows?!
4/28/2017 c1 IJustWannaReadEpicStories
Badly written. Listing off people's names in a long long long row is extremely redundant and dulls the readers mind- specially when it's done constantly. POV Changes in one chapter are extremely annoying and reader looses concentration quickly. Thought process and storylines are extremely cliché and it doesn't feel natural- Actually it feels awkward.
Lastly; Your God Be Damned Author's Notes right in the middle of the story is unprofessional and disruptive to the reading- Readers lose consentration and interest.
Badly written. Listing off people's names in a long long long row is extremely redundant and dulls the readers mind- specially when it's done constantly. POV Changes in one chapter are extremely annoying and reader looses concentration quickly. Thought process and storylines are extremely cliché and it doesn't feel natural- Actually it feels awkward.
Lastly; Your God Be Damned Author's Notes right in the middle of the story is unprofessional and disruptive to the reading- Readers lose consentration and interest.
4/19/2016 c10 nk
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good one omeo
bwwahhhaa
good one omeo
12/29/2015 c38 Line464d
Too lazy to log in~ ._.
Anyway, GODDAMN YOU'RE SHAMELESS, ROGUE! Just 'kissing the fuck out of' people in bright publicity like that... I would have smacked him a new one!
And I saw how you sneaked Lenny in there, you bastard ;)
Anyway, awesome epilogue chapter, loved it! Isn't it nice to have ended the story though?
Too lazy to log in~ ._.
Anyway, GODDAMN YOU'RE SHAMELESS, ROGUE! Just 'kissing the fuck out of' people in bright publicity like that... I would have smacked him a new one!
And I saw how you sneaked Lenny in there, you bastard ;)
Anyway, awesome epilogue chapter, loved it! Isn't it nice to have ended the story though?
11/7/2015 c37
4Line464d
Ohhhh~ is it done already? :(
Well, you really did a good job om this thing! You really need to teach me your funny ways, Sensei, I seriously lack at that department I'm afraid.
Eh, anyway, nice with a calm and funny chapter on top of all the fighting and tension~!
Hope it won't be two months this time around! XD

Ohhhh~ is it done already? :(
Well, you really did a good job om this thing! You really need to teach me your funny ways, Sensei, I seriously lack at that department I'm afraid.
Eh, anyway, nice with a calm and funny chapter on top of all the fighting and tension~!
Hope it won't be two months this time around! XD
8/14/2015 c36 Line464d
Now, then, this biatch better be dead, I don't wasn't to see no demon beast resurrecting himself and killing everything
Now, then, this biatch better be dead, I don't wasn't to see no demon beast resurrecting himself and killing everything
8/1/2015 c35 Line464d
FINALLY CAUGHT A STREAK OF INTERNET! YES!
Anyway, awesome chapter, as always. It was nice with some Rena/Rengo POV, and Yunna finally released her powers!
FINALLY CAUGHT A STREAK OF INTERNET! YES!
Anyway, awesome chapter, as always. It was nice with some Rena/Rengo POV, and Yunna finally released her powers!
6/24/2015 c5 Guest
lol the story about yukino and sting was funny, the part where he flew to the hospital and after that
lol the story about yukino and sting was funny, the part where he flew to the hospital and after that
6/24/2015 c34 Line464d
Good to see you back at it, Fairy-chan! I'd been looking forward to this
Awesome with the part with Rengo, Keko, Yunna and Rena, and nice with some Kristina-action too ;)
I don't know if I have a bad memory - scratch that, I know I do, but I don't know if that's why I can't remember Kristina going to the dark side (Darth Vader's voice) but it surprised me
At any rate, keep up the good work!
Good to see you back at it, Fairy-chan! I'd been looking forward to this
Awesome with the part with Rengo, Keko, Yunna and Rena, and nice with some Kristina-action too ;)
I don't know if I have a bad memory - scratch that, I know I do, but I don't know if that's why I can't remember Kristina going to the dark side (Darth Vader's voice) but it surprised me
At any rate, keep up the good work!