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9/3/2015 c56 3fireball900
Brilliant story, followed you here from Spacebattles (You'll see me comment on the Phoenix thread at some point, no doubt).
Also left a kudos on your AOO version.

You're brilliant at taking superpowered Taylors and making it a good story.
8/30/2015 c56 1Indecisive Bob
Excellent story! I loved how this story clearly has a character that is the very definition of OP, yet is still a great story to read. Taylor is a monster in combat and practically unstoppable, so the story's focus is on the moral and emotional complications of being one of the most powerful people in the world. You've done a wonderful job with story, and I thank you for sharing this with us.
8/26/2015 c53 Guest
That's not how jack slashs powers work and jack would never have allowed what was done to Danny until after he'd been able to capture Taylor and since there are now powers who could stop her he'd never be able to capture her
8/23/2015 c46 Sorlian
Man I definitely hadn't caught the Ghostbusters reference the first time around! VERY nice!
8/11/2015 c56 xxxrae97xxx
Holy Shit. I don't even fucking know worm, I was interested, planned to read it, but holy shit this is a magnificent fic. Goddamn
8/11/2015 c32 hye1995
So she basically made a Rasengan? Just with other stuff instead.
8/11/2015 c31 hye1995
Ah. Sorry about my previous review. Turns out all had a problem with .

If Coil wasn't scared before, then he better be now, after that little demonstration of power
8/11/2015 c2 hye1995
Yo. i like this story. I have one question. In this chapter, right at the beginning, the line(s) before "the official frowned", was that supposed to be this weird text? /8ea8f47bae4ac32fc5aff20d784923f6

Because if it was, then i think it fucked with my FF pages. Since i opened this chapter, i haven't been able to open anything else on FF. It might be a coincidence, but again, it might not.
8/7/2015 c56 GoldenKingOfUnlimitedBlades
Wait a minute... dod you post all of these chapters in one go? Cause I don't see the "Updated" thing on the top...

Anyways, this story was absolutely incredible... didn't like some things like Taylor being a little too emotionless most of the time, what happened to her dad, NO LINE BREAKS, and a couple of other little things but all in all, it was a spectacular read


PS... I think a Worm story with Danny Phantom (or at least someone with said powers) would be pretty cool JUST SAYING xD
8/2/2015 c1 Sphere Warrior
Nice wordcount ;)
7/30/2015 c56 10HecatonchiresLM
A super-overpowered Taylor, but a fun read :) I've seen magical index/scientifc railgun and I know the power, but wow, new levels :)
7/28/2015 c56 Guest
Pretty good story. Thanks for writing it. I had great time reading it.
7/8/2015 c56 xbox432
Positively LOVED this story. When I saw the xover I thought this would be an insert of the "Railgun", boy was I surprised. I had absolutely no idea you'd go in this direction. Everything was just... wow.

And I noticed the word count you sly fox you, that is a pretty impressive way for an author to gloat about their skill.

The only, and I mean only, improvement I have for the story is that you didn't use scene breaks when changing POVs. Other than that all I can say is thank you for this amazing story. :D
6/26/2015 c56 1Siatru
Awesome story! Just one complaint tho...
It's the total lack of line breaks!
It confuses me sometimes _
6/13/2015 c56 3Death to Original Naming
Damn this is good. Too bad it doesn't look like you'll be continuing on it though... Oh well, I enjoyed it enough.

While I liked how Jack's death ended, I was honestly hoping for Accelerator's black wings of death to make an appearance. Then again... Would she need to be introduced to antimatter before she can make the wings?

Good writing. Hoping against hope that your muse will lead you to write more~!

Thx 4 writing!
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