for Acceleration11/21/2020 c44 Guest
this chapter felt creepily like "power of friendship" really creepy
this chapter felt creepily like "power of friendship" really creepy
11/21/2020 c7 Guest
i like that Taylor doesnt get the usual treatment from writers, that being they completely crush her spine during moments like these here but somehow she becomes a badass warlord or some shit when its time for battle or politics, its fucking weird and just stupid.
thanks you
i like that Taylor doesnt get the usual treatment from writers, that being they completely crush her spine during moments like these here but somehow she becomes a badass warlord or some shit when its time for battle or politics, its fucking weird and just stupid.
thanks you
11/7/2020 c10 bikoukitsune
I really like the fact your story is comlplete with 99999 words but I also want you to add a word somewhere to make it an even 100000
I really like the fact your story is comlplete with 99999 words but I also want you to add a word somewhere to make it an even 100000
10/13/2020 c56 Rolling Ill Witted
Im so distraught, and blown away after reading this story today. Thank you for posting, I really enjoyed it.
Im so distraught, and blown away after reading this story today. Thank you for posting, I really enjoyed it.
9/22/2020 c56 SeverlyLate
the author made his best to make story stupid with all the faux trumped up drama
basically no cliche stones are left unturned
the author made his best to make story stupid with all the faux trumped up drama
basically no cliche stones are left unturned
9/19/2020 c1 
1Vlad the Impaler the 21st
99,999 words? That's incredible, I never seen such a perfect number since I started reading on this site. Its too perfect to squander no doubt the best way to end a story, with a round number.
1Vlad the Impaler the 21st99,999 words? That's incredible, I never seen such a perfect number since I started reading on this site. Its too perfect to squander no doubt the best way to end a story, with a round number.
9/8/2020 c56 Corwyn
Loved this story! Found it on SV, jumped here to comment that it was excellent. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Loved this story! Found it on SV, jumped here to comment that it was excellent. Thank you for sharing it with us.
7/22/2020 c56 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Dude. This was just straight up awesome. I've never liked tragedy stories, but this was amazing. It really got me emotionally invested!
Dude. This was just straight up awesome. I've never liked tragedy stories, but this was amazing. It really got me emotionally invested!
7/22/2020 c23 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Where are the line breaks? I can't tell where one part starts and the other ends. It's annoying
Where are the line breaks? I can't tell where one part starts and the other ends. It's annoying
6/14/2020 c56 Donn
That was really good ending , especialy the last its just great , thanks make a good story tho. ( )
That was really good ending , especialy the last its just great , thanks make a good story tho. ( )