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great job with this, c:
great job with this, c:
6/24/2014 c1 
2federer4ever
Such a beautiful outlook into Hermione's life. She's one of my favorite characters, and the way you have portrayed her childhood, eventually building up to her married life was truly heart-warming. The incident with her wanting to take in a stray cat, and her love for books, or her guilt over Sirius's death. It was endearing and you make me love her character all the more.
Only mistake I have found is with the sequence of events transpired, Sirius's death comes before the Lavender incident, but then again, it might have been intentional. I loved it, anyways and I hope you write more romione fics! Good luck and Happy writing! :)
2federer4everSuch a beautiful outlook into Hermione's life. She's one of my favorite characters, and the way you have portrayed her childhood, eventually building up to her married life was truly heart-warming. The incident with her wanting to take in a stray cat, and her love for books, or her guilt over Sirius's death. It was endearing and you make me love her character all the more.
Only mistake I have found is with the sequence of events transpired, Sirius's death comes before the Lavender incident, but then again, it might have been intentional. I loved it, anyways and I hope you write more romione fics! Good luck and Happy writing! :)
6/21/2014 c1 70Anka7995
Aww... It was really good, Jin! I loved the depiction of the vital scenes of Hermione's the last line... Aw, it was the perfect ending and made me smile and want to cry at the same time. Perfect! Loved it,Jin!
70Anka7995Aww... It was really good, Jin! I loved the depiction of the vital scenes of Hermione's the last line... Aw, it was the perfect ending and made me smile and want to cry at the same time. Perfect! Loved it,Jin!
6/21/2014 c1 48bonniebonbon
WHOAAAA AMAZING
oh my god love the last section and how ron finally reads hogwarts a history and oh my god it's just perfect
plus great choice of starting and ending with book like wow yes that's a good concrete noun
48bonniebonbonWHOAAAA AMAZING
oh my god love the last section and how ron finally reads hogwarts a history and oh my god it's just perfect
plus great choice of starting and ending with book like wow yes that's a good concrete noun