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21TheWorldBookGirl
Such a touching ficlet. ,w, It filled my little fangirl heart to a point where it was almost overload. Good job.
21TheWorldBookGirlSuch a touching ficlet. ,w, It filled my little fangirl heart to a point where it was almost overload. Good job.
9/6/2014 c1 Marla
Your writing is not descriptive enough to be interesting and engaging. Okay but could be much better.
Your writing is not descriptive enough to be interesting and engaging. Okay but could be much better.
7/9/2014 c1 Doni
New love doesn't replace the old love in our hearts, doesn't fill the voids, it just makes itself a new place. Lovely work.
New love doesn't replace the old love in our hearts, doesn't fill the voids, it just makes itself a new place. Lovely work.
6/22/2014 c1 12sword slasher
Well this story just took a spear and pierced it right through the feels ;( it was so sad and beautiful. bravo bravisimo you should write more when your sleepy if this is what comes out (it works it's the only way I can write when im tired and it's dawn)
12sword slasherWell this story just took a spear and pierced it right through the feels ;( it was so sad and beautiful. bravo bravisimo you should write more when your sleepy if this is what comes out (it works it's the only way I can write when im tired and it's dawn)
6/21/2014 c1 198Bramblerose4
I don't think you need to pretend it's a masterpiece because it IS a masterpiece. Just the perfect amount of sad and happy to make my heart sigh with fulfillment. It's just what I needed to finish off this wonderful summer night.
198Bramblerose4I don't think you need to pretend it's a masterpiece because it IS a masterpiece. Just the perfect amount of sad and happy to make my heart sigh with fulfillment. It's just what I needed to finish off this wonderful summer night.