for The Second Soul2/5 c4 adamfranklin.uu
I read your story and enjoyed it. It would be great in comic format. If you are interested in making it in comic format do let me know. Then we can discuss it further and I will explain everything about comics in detail.
I read your story and enjoyed it. It would be great in comic format. If you are interested in making it in comic format do let me know. Then we can discuss it further and I will explain everything about comics in detail.
10/10/2022 c4 Eldersprig
Annoyed this wasn't continued. However, I applaud the decision to kill Dumbles as soon as possible.
Annoyed this wasn't continued. However, I applaud the decision to kill Dumbles as soon as possible.
8/28/2022 c4 
10terrahsims
Crying hard on the bed laying in the fetal position since this story has not been updated since 2017. Thank you for sharing this short, too short story with us.
10terrahsimsCrying hard on the bed laying in the fetal position since this story has not been updated since 2017. Thank you for sharing this short, too short story with us.
3/30/2019 c4 197Luiz4200
He should have suspected whoever ransacked his office would have doctored his lemon drops. Moody will be so disappointed.
197Luiz4200He should have suspected whoever ransacked his office would have doctored his lemon drops. Moody will be so disappointed.
6/25/2018 c5 NateP
Hello! this story shows promise! i hope you can continue this one! I like the premise of Tom/Harry. Their interaction is well thought out so far!
Hello! this story shows promise! i hope you can continue this one! I like the premise of Tom/Harry. Their interaction is well thought out so far!
6/20/2018 c5 Savanna
Love this story so please update
Love this story so please update
1/19/2018 c5 2nate-king
This had been an interesting read
Hoping for an update this year
LunaMione is very much awaited
2nate-kingThis had been an interesting read
Hoping for an update this year
LunaMione is very much awaited
12/26/2017 c5 LtsHrIt4ThBoyz
Hi, again! I do hope that you'll perhaps consider continuing this story as well as 'Return of the Squib'; I find I'm seriously curious to see where it's going.
Thank you, again for returning to us!
Take care!
Hi, again! I do hope that you'll perhaps consider continuing this story as well as 'Return of the Squib'; I find I'm seriously curious to see where it's going.
Thank you, again for returning to us!
Take care!
12/23/2017 c2 Fast Frank
This reminds me of the BtVS/SG-1 crossovers, "Godess or Goa'uld" and "Dawn of the Tok'ra", with 'Shard of Tom' playing the role of advisor in the hero's head.
This reminds me of the BtVS/SG-1 crossovers, "Godess or Goa'uld" and "Dawn of the Tok'ra", with 'Shard of Tom' playing the role of advisor in the hero's head.
12/23/2017 c1 Fast Frank
So, before he killed Myrtle, Tom was a stable, psychotic, monster?
So, before he killed Myrtle, Tom was a stable, psychotic, monster?
12/22/2017 c5 Guest
The second soul please
The second soul please
12/22/2017 c4 SGM84
Just read the 4 chapters that you have up i quite enjoyed it and hope you continue with it as its very good.
Just read the 4 chapters that you have up i quite enjoyed it and hope you continue with it as its very good.