for The Dream10/10/2018 c1 Drumboy100
Yup, I also should not have read this one while I was at work! :) I admire your bravery, writing in the present tense-it definitely added to the poetry. "The morning light turns her hair into a fiery mane of tarnished gold." Good line. ..."delayed too long in kissing her. He quickly remedied the situation." Yes! The woman in this story is me, and yes, Frank, your name is forever on my lips and in my heart. This was an intriguing read for sure, and I felt like it wasn't just a raunchy interlude, that it showed a deep love and commitment and connection that was the foundation for how they expressed it. Great job!
Yup, I also should not have read this one while I was at work! :) I admire your bravery, writing in the present tense-it definitely added to the poetry. "The morning light turns her hair into a fiery mane of tarnished gold." Good line. ..."delayed too long in kissing her. He quickly remedied the situation." Yes! The woman in this story is me, and yes, Frank, your name is forever on my lips and in my heart. This was an intriguing read for sure, and I felt like it wasn't just a raunchy interlude, that it showed a deep love and commitment and connection that was the foundation for how they expressed it. Great job!
4/10/2018 c1 Miumiu
Oh man!
You are a gifted writer. I cant write to save my life.
Having said that I noticed you wrote this in 2014 and The Beach in 2013. All your other works have been F/N up until now.
I do hope you would consider writing F/C stories someday. Just a readers wish.
Oh man!
You are a gifted writer. I cant write to save my life.
Having said that I noticed you wrote this in 2014 and The Beach in 2013. All your other works have been F/N up until now.
I do hope you would consider writing F/C stories someday. Just a readers wish.
4/10/2018 c1 Guest
Callie!
Nancy gets everything else. Lets leave Frank Hardy for Callie!
Callie!
Nancy gets everything else. Lets leave Frank Hardy for Callie!
3/31/2016 c1 Guest
NANCY!
NANCY!
6/25/2014 c1 Cheryl
Hey! First of all... Wow! I've never asked anyone to write a story before and it was actually done. I'm speechless. Thank you so much!
Next- whew! Steamy- loved it. You have a great ability to write romance and love (and lust!) with an almost "fade to black" quality which leaves a lot to the imagination and doesn't get raunchy. That's hard to do. You also managed to write for the masses, somehow. What I mean is- your description is vague and therefore, while clearly it is me (erm.. Me and Lazy Panther) with Frank...
Just kidding... I totally know this is Callie with Frank; however, to a Nancy fan, the way in which you described "her" hair could fit Nancy, too. That's great craft and thought. I appreciate your careful attention to diction. I say it all the time. You can WRITE.
I'm a big fan of your stories. I actually like Nancy Drew- just with Ned. I know this is my bias, but it seems like almost every story posted is about Nancy and Frank here. Plus, in my mind, Frank would be the perfect stand up, one woman man. I won't digress too much here about that, but suffice it to say I'll read all of your stories gladly, no matter what the subject, since you are such a great picture-painter. :) But, you know, I mean I certainly wouldn't DIScourage any more Frank/ Callie stories you'd want to write- lol.
Thanks so much for this! You're the best!
Hey! First of all... Wow! I've never asked anyone to write a story before and it was actually done. I'm speechless. Thank you so much!
Next- whew! Steamy- loved it. You have a great ability to write romance and love (and lust!) with an almost "fade to black" quality which leaves a lot to the imagination and doesn't get raunchy. That's hard to do. You also managed to write for the masses, somehow. What I mean is- your description is vague and therefore, while clearly it is me (erm.. Me and Lazy Panther) with Frank...
Just kidding... I totally know this is Callie with Frank; however, to a Nancy fan, the way in which you described "her" hair could fit Nancy, too. That's great craft and thought. I appreciate your careful attention to diction. I say it all the time. You can WRITE.
I'm a big fan of your stories. I actually like Nancy Drew- just with Ned. I know this is my bias, but it seems like almost every story posted is about Nancy and Frank here. Plus, in my mind, Frank would be the perfect stand up, one woman man. I won't digress too much here about that, but suffice it to say I'll read all of your stories gladly, no matter what the subject, since you are such a great picture-painter. :) But, you know, I mean I certainly wouldn't DIScourage any more Frank/ Callie stories you'd want to write- lol.
Thanks so much for this! You're the best!
6/23/2014 c1 
9LazyPanther
Is it hot in here or is it just me? *fans self*
I'd say the girl in this story is me- er, Callie! Yeah, it's totally Callie... ;)
I have to admit that I don't usually read these particular kinds of scenes because they are often either too, um, "detailed" for my liking or just too over-the-top. But this was very tastefully done with sort of an ethereal feel to it. And you can really feel the love between the characters here, rather than just the lust.
And last but not least - thank you! :)
9LazyPantherIs it hot in here or is it just me? *fans self*
I'd say the girl in this story is me- er, Callie! Yeah, it's totally Callie... ;)
I have to admit that I don't usually read these particular kinds of scenes because they are often either too, um, "detailed" for my liking or just too over-the-top. But this was very tastefully done with sort of an ethereal feel to it. And you can really feel the love between the characters here, rather than just the lust.
And last but not least - thank you! :)