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3/18/2017 c1 TruVirtue
MOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRR
6/7/2016 c1 5I'm not ofreakingkay
update
12/12/2015 c1 Guest
so is this story still going on or not
12/7/2015 c1 Guest
keep going i am loving this concept
10/27/2015 c1 NightB1ade
This looks amazing. Please, I can't wait to see what you do with it.
7/13/2015 c1 3Minibeth
In the middle of the story it says "new first chapter, a lot of revision..."? Was that meant to catch their eye or was it an accident? I would suggest putting it at the top/bottom and bolding it so people see it.
Overbearing, not over-baring
But all in all, your writing style is awesome, and i found no plot holes or extremities. Nice job on this first chapter.
7/10/2015 c1 Master of Dragons God
Interesting
7/8/2015 c2 Lycaon1096
I think you should give Percy the ability to shift into a wolf
7/7/2015 c2 1bluebird397
Okay. Can't wait.
7/7/2015 c2 2Astral8
Okay
6/19/2015 c1 1bluebird397
Yah! Now I'm crying... But I love it!
6/6/2015 c1 ww1990ww
I will ask this you remember what happened last time when people from Middle Earth stopped to worship Eru? It's a hint Eru sanked gigantic isle and maked planet round not flat. So please tell me what will happen now if Percy and co will start to telling "We are Gods! Worshipp us!". I will tell you. Percy will end beyonf Doors of Night with Melkor. And to be sure thet he will never start spread this lies his tongue will be reaped out and legs/hands cuted. Yes Eru is quite vindictive when he wish to be.
6/2/2015 c3 Dagger Of Darkness
please update
5/20/2015 c3 Guest
Oh my gosh finish this
4/5/2015 c2 4littlebear62007
Update. who needs a beta?
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