for The Ray of the Morning Sunshine10/2/2017 c1 Justtokeepreading
Please write a sequel! This story is really good and interesting. Maybe you could write about the beginning of their relationship too?
Please write a sequel! This story is really good and interesting. Maybe you could write about the beginning of their relationship too?
2/21/2017 c1 Anonim
It's so swet and cool!:-)
It's so swet and cool!:-)
8/17/2016 c1 
26Fi Suki Saki
the setting was based KKM?! I imagine it more old fashion fairy tale like! XD
I honestly like the part where Akihiko enjoyed torture Mika.
I barely ever feel sorry toward someone who had hurt someone so badly without feel guilty.
I liked it!
26Fi Suki Sakithe setting was based KKM?! I imagine it more old fashion fairy tale like! XD
I honestly like the part where Akihiko enjoyed torture Mika.
I barely ever feel sorry toward someone who had hurt someone so badly without feel guilty.
I liked it!
6/1/2016 c1 xMiharux3
Wow, that story was fantastic! I couldn't stop reading it! And I plan to read more of your stories - Oh, and I think that you should write a sequel sometime! You should write something about the child :DD I would really like to read it :33
Wow, that story was fantastic! I couldn't stop reading it! And I plan to read more of your stories - Oh, and I think that you should write a sequel sometime! You should write something about the child :DD I would really like to read it :33
3/17/2016 c1 3Riuolo
This story was really good! I really loved it, and I was so sad to see it was a one shot.
3RiuoloThis story was really good! I really loved it, and I was so sad to see it was a one shot.
11/28/2014 c1 21YinKeket
yay Misaki is going to have a baby with Usagi-san. oh wow the flashback of his evil would Mika hurting Misaki. yay Misaki keeping the baby safe. awwww cute Misaki wants bread because his child inside him. that was nice of Kisa to help Misaki. oh no Misaki is not with Usagi-san at all not good. really you believe this evil Mika about Misaki runway. wow 3 months and his belly is showing. wow Misaki's past is sad how his lost his brother and home. it was sweet the kids went to Misaki for hope and warmth. oh man Kisa will be in so much trouble if Usagi finds out he was hiding his lover away from him. oh so after Misaki got ill and sick for a week Usagi changed awesome. this is really good to change the king and the people in the castle can relax. well the cat is out of the bag. he told his friend and poor guy. well he heard everything from the two teens which is good, on what Mika did to Misaki. i guess not Akihiko didn't hear all of it. yay Misaki got him to stop and listen after he was with child his child. awesome Misaki is a half demon and half human. so the child will have a tiny bit of human and a lot of demon cool. oh so Misaki is the son of the South Demon King and Usagi is the North Demon King. hey Misaki got the kingdom together without even knowing it. yay they got married and now Misaki is 5 month. lol Misaki is bored wouldn't blame him though being with child and want to do something. yay gardening is safe and seems to be fun. awesome Ritsu is alive is good to have him friend back. oh so Takano owned Ritsu and lives in the castle so this is really good. awwwww Ritsu has a thing for Takano cute. yay Kisa is also safe and in the army. wait so Misaki doesn't know he's a half demon. man it felt like there could be more of this. keep up the good work and do your best. wish there was more to this.
21YinKeketyay Misaki is going to have a baby with Usagi-san. oh wow the flashback of his evil would Mika hurting Misaki. yay Misaki keeping the baby safe. awwww cute Misaki wants bread because his child inside him. that was nice of Kisa to help Misaki. oh no Misaki is not with Usagi-san at all not good. really you believe this evil Mika about Misaki runway. wow 3 months and his belly is showing. wow Misaki's past is sad how his lost his brother and home. it was sweet the kids went to Misaki for hope and warmth. oh man Kisa will be in so much trouble if Usagi finds out he was hiding his lover away from him. oh so after Misaki got ill and sick for a week Usagi changed awesome. this is really good to change the king and the people in the castle can relax. well the cat is out of the bag. he told his friend and poor guy. well he heard everything from the two teens which is good, on what Mika did to Misaki. i guess not Akihiko didn't hear all of it. yay Misaki got him to stop and listen after he was with child his child. awesome Misaki is a half demon and half human. so the child will have a tiny bit of human and a lot of demon cool. oh so Misaki is the son of the South Demon King and Usagi is the North Demon King. hey Misaki got the kingdom together without even knowing it. yay they got married and now Misaki is 5 month. lol Misaki is bored wouldn't blame him though being with child and want to do something. yay gardening is safe and seems to be fun. awesome Ritsu is alive is good to have him friend back. oh so Takano owned Ritsu and lives in the castle so this is really good. awwwww Ritsu has a thing for Takano cute. yay Kisa is also safe and in the army. wait so Misaki doesn't know he's a half demon. man it felt like there could be more of this. keep up the good work and do your best. wish there was more to this.
11/12/2014 c1 Guest
I love your story but I would love to know the continuation of it
I love your story but I would love to know the continuation of it
10/26/2014 c1 Appeasement
Not a big fan of how it got rapey when Usagi got Misaki, but it all ended well (for them at least). What I did like though was how he stopped when Misaki yelled he was pregnant. It shows that he's not completely heartless even though he's the demon king.
Like all your stories this one could be improved on grammar and spelling. I hope you will one day go back and fix your mistakes. Good grammar makes for a better story (and you might get more readers).
Really enjoyed this oneshot. It was an interesting read.
Not a big fan of how it got rapey when Usagi got Misaki, but it all ended well (for them at least). What I did like though was how he stopped when Misaki yelled he was pregnant. It shows that he's not completely heartless even though he's the demon king.
Like all your stories this one could be improved on grammar and spelling. I hope you will one day go back and fix your mistakes. Good grammar makes for a better story (and you might get more readers).
Really enjoyed this oneshot. It was an interesting read.
7/9/2014 c1 3lv90047
Oh, I loved this! If you can, please do make a continuation for this story! I'd really love to see what'll happen next! :D Yet if not, I completely understand. Thank you for writing this tale. I'm glad that I got the chance to read this!
Overall, great story! I do hope you write more in the future!
3lv90047Oh, I loved this! If you can, please do make a continuation for this story! I'd really love to see what'll happen next! :D Yet if not, I completely understand. Thank you for writing this tale. I'm glad that I got the chance to read this!
Overall, great story! I do hope you write more in the future!
6/29/2014 c1 1blackhound14
So cute I would really love a sequel! And if possible write one for Takano/Ritsu as well!
1blackhound14So cute I would really love a sequel! And if possible write one for Takano/Ritsu as well!
6/24/2014 c1 5Moonlit-Ajisai
them feels man them feels. Haruhi-kun your writing is getting better and better. You do still have some grammar issues but that's perfectly fine. (Just the timing of some of the words) And there should be a sequel :'D.
5Moonlit-Ajisaithem feels man them feels. Haruhi-kun your writing is getting better and better. You do still have some grammar issues but that's perfectly fine. (Just the timing of some of the words) And there should be a sequel :'D.