6/23/2014 c1 12NarwhaleNapper
A bit fandom blind here, but I enjoyed reading this! Not sure why, but I get a kick out of a character's pain if it's written properly. And properly written this was! I do feel bad for Eggdmund, but I couldn't help but just laugh at his misery and the agonizing events he went through for one week. And I thought that my life was bad!
No grammar issues or typos were found, as far as I could tell, so great job on this. I think it's been a while since you've written something, but looks like you still got it. Keep up the good work :)
A bit fandom blind here, but I enjoyed reading this! Not sure why, but I get a kick out of a character's pain if it's written properly. And properly written this was! I do feel bad for Eggdmund, but I couldn't help but just laugh at his misery and the agonizing events he went through for one week. And I thought that my life was bad!
No grammar issues or typos were found, as far as I could tell, so great job on this. I think it's been a while since you've written something, but looks like you still got it. Keep up the good work :)