for Taken1/30 c1 Natalie
Good
Good
3/29/2016 c5 sholtsclaw698
loving the story and looking forward to reading more, i hope someday you are able to come back to it
loving the story and looking forward to reading more, i hope someday you are able to come back to it
2/25/2016 c3 moomoomilk meow
This the best fanfic ever! You have an amazing story and you are an outstanding inspirational writer! I have read this about 20 times because it so amazing! This is my favourite fanfic ever! And it is not just the plot but also they way it is written! You are truly amazing! And if anyone ever tells you that your bad at writing they say that because they are jealous of your amazing talent and they will never be as good as you! So please don't stop writing and update!
This the best fanfic ever! You have an amazing story and you are an outstanding inspirational writer! I have read this about 20 times because it so amazing! This is my favourite fanfic ever! And it is not just the plot but also they way it is written! You are truly amazing! And if anyone ever tells you that your bad at writing they say that because they are jealous of your amazing talent and they will never be as good as you! So please don't stop writing and update!
12/22/2015 c3 Guest
Plz update
Plz update
11/8/2015 c5 Guest
Best story ever please update
Best story ever please update
9/13/2015 c5 corkykellems
OMG...I sure hope Jake get's there in time...or is She going to get changed ? can't wait to find out...Thanks
OMG...I sure hope Jake get's there in time...or is She going to get changed ? can't wait to find out...Thanks
9/13/2015 c5 Guest
Please update again
Please update again
8/16/2015 c4 
16EndlessRdr2022
I like the underlying story line. But this chapter had a handful of glaring spelling/grammar errors. Don't forget spellcheck doesn't see if the word is used properly. IE: counselor, menacingly, capital letters for proper nouns, and periods in the right places. Not trying to discourage you, so please take this as the constructive criticism it was intended.
16EndlessRdr2022I like the underlying story line. But this chapter had a handful of glaring spelling/grammar errors. Don't forget spellcheck doesn't see if the word is used properly. IE: counselor, menacingly, capital letters for proper nouns, and periods in the right places. Not trying to discourage you, so please take this as the constructive criticism it was intended.
9/1/2014 c3 6Lionnara
Jskes is an ass and hd already hurt her and hope bella can come clean and tell what happen before the bleeding, its jacob since she assulted her but she could kicked him in the nuts, thats sexuamly assult if i am right and kidnapping, should of been charged, hope charlie sees the the jacob behind the facade/and his true colors.
6LionnaraJskes is an ass and hd already hurt her and hope bella can come clean and tell what happen before the bleeding, its jacob since she assulted her but she could kicked him in the nuts, thats sexuamly assult if i am right and kidnapping, should of been charged, hope charlie sees the the jacob behind the facade/and his true colors.