for Courage and Cunning7/24/2021 c51 meowcat
YAY! HALF BLOODED SON OF A MUGGLE! HALF BLOODED SON OF A MUGGLE!
YAY! HALF BLOODED SON OF A MUGGLE! HALF BLOODED SON OF A MUGGLE!
7/23/2021 c65 meowcat
I'm waiting for a new chapter (cuz you still posted after three years later for the previous chapters), and I'm waiting to see how did they found where Helga's fake cup is and I mostly wanted to see Salazar kick Voldy Mouldy's butt (you know what I mean) also someone in another website posted your story so I wanna ask is that your another account or is that person copying your I saw there was more chapters of this story I was SO FREAKING HAPPY THAT I HAD A STRANGE FEELING IN MY BODY! I am planning on writing a story so I want to ask you for advise (I'm very bad at writing these and this story has... Welp, plot twists that made my brain crack) I am looking forward to see a new chapter and when I read a chapter you said the chapter has almost 10,000 words...
I'm waiting for a new chapter (cuz you still posted after three years later for the previous chapters), and I'm waiting to see how did they found where Helga's fake cup is and I mostly wanted to see Salazar kick Voldy Mouldy's butt (you know what I mean) also someone in another website posted your story so I wanna ask is that your another account or is that person copying your I saw there was more chapters of this story I was SO FREAKING HAPPY THAT I HAD A STRANGE FEELING IN MY BODY! I am planning on writing a story so I want to ask you for advise (I'm very bad at writing these and this story has... Welp, plot twists that made my brain crack) I am looking forward to see a new chapter and when I read a chapter you said the chapter has almost 10,000 words...
7/23/2021 c50 meowcat
wow
wow
6/16/2021 c1 
5Fallen Gods Rise
A decent start but the use of the fanon wizards oath introduces huge plot holes and/or loss of drama. In this very chapter Sal uses the Oath then a few paragraphs later James and Lily are wondering if he's telling the truth about Peter, Why? he can just make an oath. Why should anyone need to angst over trust issues when you've already made them irrelevant.
If it's not obvious I think using the Wizard's Oath is a terrible decision in every fic and will probably destroy SoD, Drama, or characters intelligence.
5Fallen Gods RiseA decent start but the use of the fanon wizards oath introduces huge plot holes and/or loss of drama. In this very chapter Sal uses the Oath then a few paragraphs later James and Lily are wondering if he's telling the truth about Peter, Why? he can just make an oath. Why should anyone need to angst over trust issues when you've already made them irrelevant.
If it's not obvious I think using the Wizard's Oath is a terrible decision in every fic and will probably destroy SoD, Drama, or characters intelligence.
5/23/2021 c65 2stormwingssky
I’ve spent more time than I’d care to admit today curled up in a chair reading, but I’ve thoroughly enjoyed it. Time well spent, for sure. I really love the character development and and the pacing of the story, and overall I think this is a very good read. The details sprinkled through the story are very nice to see tie together, even if things don’t completely make sense at the time.
I’m just also going to quickly thank you for not pairing any of the ancient characters, that has bothered me before in some fics, and to have it not happen here was very nice and allowed me to thoroughly enjoy the story without any of that weirdness.
I’m not sure if you’ll ever update it again, but if you do I’m happy to start reading!
2stormwingsskyI’ve spent more time than I’d care to admit today curled up in a chair reading, but I’ve thoroughly enjoyed it. Time well spent, for sure. I really love the character development and and the pacing of the story, and overall I think this is a very good read. The details sprinkled through the story are very nice to see tie together, even if things don’t completely make sense at the time.
I’m just also going to quickly thank you for not pairing any of the ancient characters, that has bothered me before in some fics, and to have it not happen here was very nice and allowed me to thoroughly enjoy the story without any of that weirdness.
I’m not sure if you’ll ever update it again, but if you do I’m happy to start reading!
5/8/2021 c65 cerulean369
I spent the better part of the day reading this story and here I am at 9am the next day with no sleep because this story was absolutely enticing. I really commend you for a well written story with the perfects amount of details and foreshadowing that with attention slowly build on each other and reveal a bigger picture. Even certain stuff that would seem fantastical and a bit over the top in usual circumstances, did not seem so with your plot and great writing. This was truly a joy to read, and I won’t go into specific aspects I loved since that would take me forever but I need to mention that I loved all your characterization, to state it simply. If you do update again I can say that I can’t wait. :) Thank you for what you have shared and I hope you’re doing well!
I spent the better part of the day reading this story and here I am at 9am the next day with no sleep because this story was absolutely enticing. I really commend you for a well written story with the perfects amount of details and foreshadowing that with attention slowly build on each other and reveal a bigger picture. Even certain stuff that would seem fantastical and a bit over the top in usual circumstances, did not seem so with your plot and great writing. This was truly a joy to read, and I won’t go into specific aspects I loved since that would take me forever but I need to mention that I loved all your characterization, to state it simply. If you do update again I can say that I can’t wait. :) Thank you for what you have shared and I hope you’re doing well!
5/1/2021 c24 8Fantasywings7
Hi,
Great story! I love your way of writing, the humour, the feels, it is just... charming, and I love your Salazar! :) As for Gordy/Godric... hmm... while I guessed his identity for the moment he cursed Draco wandlessly, I don't honestly know what I think about him, if I would be able to forgive him as easily as Saazar, he has been alive ALL THIS TIME, and let his "best friend" grieve for him and miss him, regretting his choice to become immortal, and yet, he IN FACT DID THE EXACT SAME THING HIMSELF, AND DID NOT TELL HIM UNTIL NOW?... I find the fact that he hold a grudge on Sal for no less than A 1000 YEARS and in revenge trashed the Slytherin house reputation and is responsible for the animosity between the Gryffindor and Slytherin houses is just hard to stomach...and that he must have known how much Salazar missed him... and yet, he kept himself hidden from him for a 1000 YEARS and let him grieve him and believe him dead!? It just... a bit much to stomach ...
However, your story is interesting, and it is very noble indeed of Sal to forgive him,( even if it is a bit unrealistic that he did it immediately), and Godric regret seems genuine... Storywise, it is interesting to have Godric here, despite of what he has done, he is charming, and seems like a fun guy, and I am glad for Sal, for the reunion... however, I am hoping that Godric somehow can make it up to Sal and Slytherin House... he really owe him that much...!
Another question, it Voldy really the ONLY descendant of Sal? Maybe he had more than one child...As it is so long ago, maybe he has other descendants... I really hope so!
Immortality must be a hard thing... to see your wife and children die... Who were Sal's and Godric's wives?
Interesting story, very entertaining, I really hope that it is not abandoned, please come back and finish it!
8Fantasywings7Hi,
Great story! I love your way of writing, the humour, the feels, it is just... charming, and I love your Salazar! :) As for Gordy/Godric... hmm... while I guessed his identity for the moment he cursed Draco wandlessly, I don't honestly know what I think about him, if I would be able to forgive him as easily as Saazar, he has been alive ALL THIS TIME, and let his "best friend" grieve for him and miss him, regretting his choice to become immortal, and yet, he IN FACT DID THE EXACT SAME THING HIMSELF, AND DID NOT TELL HIM UNTIL NOW?... I find the fact that he hold a grudge on Sal for no less than A 1000 YEARS and in revenge trashed the Slytherin house reputation and is responsible for the animosity between the Gryffindor and Slytherin houses is just hard to stomach...and that he must have known how much Salazar missed him... and yet, he kept himself hidden from him for a 1000 YEARS and let him grieve him and believe him dead!? It just... a bit much to stomach ...
However, your story is interesting, and it is very noble indeed of Sal to forgive him,( even if it is a bit unrealistic that he did it immediately), and Godric regret seems genuine... Storywise, it is interesting to have Godric here, despite of what he has done, he is charming, and seems like a fun guy, and I am glad for Sal, for the reunion... however, I am hoping that Godric somehow can make it up to Sal and Slytherin House... he really owe him that much...!
Another question, it Voldy really the ONLY descendant of Sal? Maybe he had more than one child...As it is so long ago, maybe he has other descendants... I really hope so!
Immortality must be a hard thing... to see your wife and children die... Who were Sal's and Godric's wives?
Interesting story, very entertaining, I really hope that it is not abandoned, please come back and finish it!
4/20/2021 c49 jps986
My only quibble with the Graveyard scene is...why does he have glasses that aren't clear glass? He's polyjuiced into the real Harry at this point who does not need glasses.
My only quibble with the Graveyard scene is...why does he have glasses that aren't clear glass? He's polyjuiced into the real Harry at this point who does not need glasses.
4/15/2021 c51 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
4/2/2021 c54 Harry
Amazing story
Amazing story
4/2/2021 c53 L
Loving the story
Loving the story
4/3/2021 c65 L30 tH3 L1on
Please carry on with and hopefully finish this fantastic storie
Love the humour. Giving me a good laugh thankyou!
Please carry on with and hopefully finish this fantastic storie
Love the humour. Giving me a good laugh thankyou!