10/11/2021 c11 1KvAT
*Applause*

*Standing Ovation*

Fuckin' awesome of a story, holy shit!

10/10/2021 c6 KvAT
Jesus bloody Christ I knew it!
God this is the best chapter so far. Damn man, you're pounding my feels

3/25/2017 c11 Nmokad
Ah, finally got through far enought to actually type. I swear, quantum physics were so much easier when I wasn't essentially at war. Anywhoo, wonderful story, great charachter development (not to mention great characters in general), and the ending was oddly pleasing, even if it did seem like a cliff-hanger. Certainly a nice little universe you've made from the lore of the multiverse it inhabits. Shame about what hapoened to the faeries, being kicked off their own planet and all. I might just pay the invaders who did that to 'em a visit someday. A drop of Carar bacteria tends to work wonders when dealing with water-planets I find, though I perfer my not-so-lethal strain of the stuff. Oh, I've been rambling off haven't I? Hope I didn't take up to much of your time with this my dear fellow, a being like me tends to lose track of time I suppose.
W̶èll,͢ it͜ se̕em͞s ͡t̛h͞e͡ ͢c͟on͜n͡ȩctįo͠n͡ ͜is star̷tinǵ to̵ ̨b̀reak͠ now̴.̡ ̀I ͢ŗea̸ll̀y̷ n̡eed to ̀ge͢t͟ ́m̕y d͡i͘me͞n̵s͏i͡on͏a͞l ̧t̸une̸r͠s͢ f͏i͏x͠ed̀ ̀at s͡ǫme͟ ̸p͞oi͜n͘t. Į sw͝ea̶r, the g̛li̸t̕ches ͜they cau͢s̶e̵ mak̴e͘ th̷e t̀ȩxt act͝ ́li͟ķe some͝ ęd͡gy͏ t̵een̸ ìş typìng͏ ͘it! Àh̕ ͜we̷ll̸,͝ I͠'v̕e g͠ro̵wn use͜d t̨o ̸it̀ b͟y n̵ow. Ì ̡dó hope̴ yo͜u s̸w͘i̧n̨g̵ by ̀a͟t ͘s͞ome̸p͢o͏i̶nt ͠wh̶e̶n̵ yo͞ur sp͡e͘c̴ies dev̀el͘ops̨ di̸ḿe̸n͘s͏io̸n̕al͠ ̨t͜r͢a̵vęĺ, ̨I'́d͢ ̵l̶o͝v̧e͢ ͢to̡ s̢how you͡ the wor͝l͜d͜ ̧yơu'͢ve ̵madé some̢day.̷ S͏o̵ ͢i͠f͢ you͢'re ͟ȩv́e͠r fi̵n͡d ̢yo͏ur̢ ͝s̕elf wįth̷ th͠ę ͢r͠i͜g͠h̕t͘ ̛k̛i͘nd o͘f ͢t͠ec͘h, ̷just ͝l̸ook ̢fo͠r ͡p͞l͟an̴et Re͡n̴o̵cr̕an̵.̸ Li̶kȩ ̀I͞ sai͝d, ̷th̀e̢ war g̵oin͘g on̛ ̨her̢e i͝s r̴a̛th̀er͞ bot͟hersǫm̴è ͡b͘ut̀ the v͞ie͜ws o͢f̕ t͝he s̕uns a͜re̴ t̨o͜ DÌĘ ̧for̢. ̡W̕ell͠, if ̧I̸ could. Hop̢e to see y͞a͢ a͝round ḱi͢d̀do̕!
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͞-ÇE̷O̷ ̶of̨ ̛Ś.T.F

10/3/2014 c9 2FrancisJames
lol at the f*ck science part... oh how science bites back

9/30/2014 c7 Guest
I'm sorry this is very well written, one of the best written fanfictions I have seen in a long time, but I can't keep reading it simply because the human characters are completely and utterly detestable for being morally bankrupt sociopaths. I only got this far on the hope that the abyss fleet would end up brutally killing a few of them at some point.

Maybe that's the entire point, but I can't read a story with a main cast I would like nothing more then to see murdered in the most violent ways I can imagine. As it stands I'll just back out now and assume all of them die miserable, screaming deaths full of regret, its the only way I'm getting out of this with any satisfaction.

8/28/2014 c11 2Mr. Haziq
Strike Witches reference? Didn't see that one coming. Also, I'm glad Harry made it out okay. Even happy that Sakuri is sort of okay.

8/21/2014 c10 RaymooHackery
So, Kongou got master-spark'd, Anton got killed in a very Oedipus-like manner, and everyone's escaped. Wonder what happens to the scientists and Harrison. In addition, if Anton only lost two arms, how was he able to fight against Bismarck without actually being a FG himself? Did he make the sacrifices like Sayuri to walk on water, superhuman strength, etc., or did he not have to alter himself because he wasn't using guns? Curious about the next chapter.

8/13/2014 c9 Guest
I can't believe Bismarck is Abigail... I mean, who'd knew? Oh, and Nagato turning into a mega lobster is also pretty tragic I guest...