for Abyssal Diaries7/19/2014 c5 
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At the least it's not a beam weapon, I'd feel sorry for the FGs if it really is. But squid and eagle? I can imagine squid but really, eagle? Would be nice if it's a success on both of them.
3JdkLeBleau728At the least it's not a beam weapon, I'd feel sorry for the FGs if it really is. But squid and eagle? I can imagine squid but really, eagle? Would be nice if it's a success on both of them.
7/13/2014 c4 JdkLeBleau728
Wonder which class Akatsuki and Hibiki will be... Re-class as the other two or a new class? Or maybe an eventful log of them escaping? Will be waiting.
Wonder which class Akatsuki and Hibiki will be... Re-class as the other two or a new class? Or maybe an eventful log of them escaping? Will be waiting.
7/13/2014 c4 pataponvideo
I am truly wondering when the FGs will attack the base? Great story so far. I wonder if the other two FGs will somehow escape or not? Keep the great work. And the German girl I know who see going to be come. Z1, Z3, or Bismarck.
I am truly wondering when the FGs will attack the base? Great story so far. I wonder if the other two FGs will somehow escape or not? Keep the great work. And the German girl I know who see going to be come. Z1, Z3, or Bismarck.
7/11/2014 c3 10dan heron
Well, things are getting more and more interesting. I really like how you brought the sisters together. I'm really curious about how the mutations are going to end; going for something new or are they going to take on similar to established Abyssal girls.
huh, say, was Re's original profession and Satsuki's untimely end inspired by that doujin "A Destroyer's Destiny"?
Also, that testing with the doom laser reminded me a little of Jin (Mugenji)'s comic with Seaport Princess firing a "Breast Beam"
10dan heronWell, things are getting more and more interesting. I really like how you brought the sisters together. I'm really curious about how the mutations are going to end; going for something new or are they going to take on similar to established Abyssal girls.
huh, say, was Re's original profession and Satsuki's untimely end inspired by that doujin "A Destroyer's Destiny"?
Also, that testing with the doom laser reminded me a little of Jin (Mugenji)'s comic with Seaport Princess firing a "Breast Beam"
7/9/2014 c3 pataponvideo
Truly a good chapter as ever! I wonder if the FGs found the island out and sent a fleet to save them?
Truly a good chapter as ever! I wonder if the FGs found the island out and sent a fleet to save them?
7/5/2014 c2 Reviewer-san
Interesting take on the series. The abyssal-centric perspective is certainly not something that has been overdone, although several artistic liberties you've taken are stretching the suspension of disbelief quite far. It seems that our viewpoint character has quite the broken moral compass, or just a plain psychopath. It's rather interesting how he reacts to normally vile actions/scenery in his matter-of-fact way, but his super-neutral attitude does get stale after a while.
I'll be reading on. PS: I'll bust your shit up if you touch Hibiki.
Interesting take on the series. The abyssal-centric perspective is certainly not something that has been overdone, although several artistic liberties you've taken are stretching the suspension of disbelief quite far. It seems that our viewpoint character has quite the broken moral compass, or just a plain psychopath. It's rather interesting how he reacts to normally vile actions/scenery in his matter-of-fact way, but his super-neutral attitude does get stale after a while.
I'll be reading on. PS: I'll bust your shit up if you touch Hibiki.
7/5/2014 c2 pataponvideo
Corruption of FGs that are still alive is going to hard. Your going to have induce unknown experiments on living FGs while trying to make the most powerful ship. And due to the FGs being different while being sister ship will cause unknown ships to emerge. Whelp lets the test begin!
Corruption of FGs that are still alive is going to hard. Your going to have induce unknown experiments on living FGs while trying to make the most powerful ship. And due to the FGs being different while being sister ship will cause unknown ships to emerge. Whelp lets the test begin!
6/30/2014 c1 Guest
Loved it.
Loved it.
6/29/2014 c1 Nameless Fairy
Loved it.
Loved it.
6/30/2014 c1 JdkLeBleau728
Interesting, I'll be following this story from now on, so keep updates, Yay! You played Kancolle? What level are you? There's not many Kancolle fanfics around here so I'll stick with you!
Interesting, I'll be following this story from now on, so keep updates, Yay! You played Kancolle? What level are you? There's not many Kancolle fanfics around here so I'll stick with you!
6/29/2014 c1 5shadows-extra
Great start. I'm hook right away.
You know, this might be my guide book for writing the rest of my fanfic about the abyssal fleet. So detailed and creative. I like it.
5shadows-extraGreat start. I'm hook right away.
You know, this might be my guide book for writing the rest of my fanfic about the abyssal fleet. So detailed and creative. I like it.