4/13/2022 c1 Guest
Damn. Another trash edgy harem fic. Pretty disappointing with this one.
Damn. Another trash edgy harem fic. Pretty disappointing with this one.
5/28/2020 c1 Guest
Didnt you get yourself banned on spacebattles?
Didnt you get yourself banned on spacebattles?
12/4/2019 c7 Guest
And it’s done , thank god for that , sigh.
And it’s done , thank god for that , sigh.
12/4/2019 c6 Guest
just Like I thought you would do you have stripped everything else out and left him with a fruit he can’t use , and you just said it yourself without his devil fruit he is a little pussy , so what is the point then please explain.
just Like I thought you would do you have stripped everything else out and left him with a fruit he can’t use , and you just said it yourself without his devil fruit he is a little pussy , so what is the point then please explain.
12/4/2019 c6 Guest
Garbage garbage garbage , try something else , writing is not for you
Garbage garbage garbage , try something else , writing is not for you
12/4/2019 c4 Guest
And why are you telling us what the attire is of every enemy even the ones chasing Nami , you really think people give 2 fucks what everybody is wearing
And why are you telling us what the attire is of every enemy even the ones chasing Nami , you really think people give 2 fucks what everybody is wearing
12/4/2019 c4 Guest
The fight with Ganzack was probably the worst and most pointless fight I have seen in fanfics , so damn bad , you are murdering your own story , I’m reading no more ,fuck this shit!
The fight with Ganzack was probably the worst and most pointless fight I have seen in fanfics , so damn bad , you are murdering your own story , I’m reading no more ,fuck this shit!
12/4/2019 c3 Guest
When Tashigi asked the reason why he wanted to be pirate king , he said no reason , then explained the reason why he wanted to be pirate king , smh ,poor!
When Tashigi asked the reason why he wanted to be pirate king , he said no reason , then explained the reason why he wanted to be pirate king , smh ,poor!
12/4/2019 c2 Guest
I like it for the most part , just hope you don’t weaken him to make fights longer for no reason , you gave him this fruit so allow him to use it ,we all know how strong it is .
I like it for the most part , just hope you don’t weaken him to make fights longer for no reason , you gave him this fruit so allow him to use it ,we all know how strong it is .
4/10/2019 c2 Guest
I also hate these conversations... the girl rika. Needs to Learn that the world doesn't care and that there are consequences...otherwise she will just go to her death another day.
People need training. ..And they need to learn reality or they will be fucked later on. Babying kills through negligence...And if u r gonna baby...where the fuck is the mom? Y not watching the fuck king kid?
I also hate these conversations... the girl rika. Needs to Learn that the world doesn't care and that there are consequences...otherwise she will just go to her death another day.
People need training. ..And they need to learn reality or they will be fucked later on. Babying kills through negligence...And if u r gonna baby...where the fuck is the mom? Y not watching the fuck king kid?
4/10/2019 c1 Guest
I hate that conversation.
I am gonna gather close friends with me to journey to one-piece. I don't care if i die doing it...so even if ur friends don't die...you don't care that you cause them to lose their friend in you... selfish disgusting piece of trash.
I hate that conversation.
I am gonna gather close friends with me to journey to one-piece. I don't care if i die doing it...so even if ur friends don't die...you don't care that you cause them to lose their friend in you... selfish disgusting piece of trash.
1/12/2019 c1 Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon
How do you explain the lava not melting the ship made of wood? Wow killed Zoro. You monster.
How do you explain the lava not melting the ship made of wood? Wow killed Zoro. You monster.