for Kusari no Naruto8/25 c30 Albert Wilhelm Westings
that was a fun read, felt a little rushed a bit past the half way point but still it wrapped up nicely in the end
that was a fun read, felt a little rushed a bit past the half way point but still it wrapped up nicely in the end
8/17 c11 TheGoodDoctor13
Idk why the hokage hasn't told Naruto he's minatos son. He already knows he's Kushina's kid and he's seeing her memories whenever he goes to sleep so he'll find out on his own eventually. Not to mention he's a former anbu and a jonin now so theres no reason to keep that sort of knowledge hidden from him to "keep him safe" or some bs
Idk why the hokage hasn't told Naruto he's minatos son. He already knows he's Kushina's kid and he's seeing her memories whenever he goes to sleep so he'll find out on his own eventually. Not to mention he's a former anbu and a jonin now so theres no reason to keep that sort of knowledge hidden from him to "keep him safe" or some bs
6/11 c30 loaphantasma
Ahh... I LOVE this fic. It's great. It portrays the inherent problems o Naruto's world without going savior-cliche bull****. And the dynamics between characters are great.
Ahh... I LOVE this fic. It's great. It portrays the inherent problems o Naruto's world without going savior-cliche bull****. And the dynamics between characters are great.
5/11 c2 Guest
Ah, yeah. another author who thinks making his MC edgy retard is cool.
Ah, yeah. another author who thinks making his MC edgy retard is cool.
2/13 c1 Zeke Hooper
good start.
good start.
2/14 c20 samuelsequeira315
Ok... ¿Esa parte del final fue para que Haku solamente durmiera con el verdad...? ¿Verdad?
Ok... ¿Esa parte del final fue para que Haku solamente durmiera con el verdad...? ¿Verdad?
9/7/2023 c3 Animedog0001
Just started reading and nezumi reminds me of Shigure from Kenichi the mightiest disciple with the voice patterns and the simple katana design that was decribed, also the “deadly wooden spoon” is a real shigure scene. Kuma reminds me of Appachai as well.
Just started reading and nezumi reminds me of Shigure from Kenichi the mightiest disciple with the voice patterns and the simple katana design that was decribed, also the “deadly wooden spoon” is a real shigure scene. Kuma reminds me of Appachai as well.
5/7/2023 c30 Zeke Hooper
what an interesting story.
what an interesting story.
1/17/2023 c30 Guest
This should be ChildNaruto/TeenMinato since that is the only romance and sex scene in this novel.
This should be ChildNaruto/TeenMinato since that is the only romance and sex scene in this novel.
1/16/2023 c3 Hotseeit
Another story like all other, starts off unique with a cool premise but soon goes back to defult Naruto. I can already imagine Naruto geting de-powered by chapter 6-7 JUST AFTER a big traning montage and scene where he totally dominates 12 jonin ;;p
And then slowly becoming a dopey idiot. Not that he is smart i mean he does not know what chakra is; imagine living in a world of technology, in a city renowned for it's technology... and not knowing what electricity is ;p the very idea if goofy even if he is obviously kinda retarded.
I REALLY wanted to read to just see if those are Lee, Tenten and Neji as his team-mates cos that sounds kinda amazing. Bear being mentally stunted due to fucked up coils and probably Guy's steroids, Nezumi a Tenten with some effed up history and Neji become a perv cos like... yes obviously, how are hyuuga not? Why are Hyuuga even let into the village, they can just peep under clothes ;p Pervy Neji over here probably saw mom and dad make him a brother when he unlocked his Byakugan way too early and thats how his fucked up started ;p
Kinda hoped that maybe Seru despite being monkey is a left fielded Orochimaru (since you seem to go with the silly Klark Kent idea of ANBU anonimity; i mean cmon just give Naruto fox mask not some edglorde emo teen crow. It's not like the whole city does not know who is the masked kid with golden chains sticking out his arse) but i doubt now since he is apparently genuinely a moron, honestly seems to be the Kakashi brand of moron even by his annoying bs.
But since this is just another pseudo-grey morality that ultimately goes full paladin story i think we all agree it's a pass. (Too many of those on the site, way too boring, why do people even bother, just go watch crappy original Naruto anime for that)
Another story like all other, starts off unique with a cool premise but soon goes back to defult Naruto. I can already imagine Naruto geting de-powered by chapter 6-7 JUST AFTER a big traning montage and scene where he totally dominates 12 jonin ;;p
And then slowly becoming a dopey idiot. Not that he is smart i mean he does not know what chakra is; imagine living in a world of technology, in a city renowned for it's technology... and not knowing what electricity is ;p the very idea if goofy even if he is obviously kinda retarded.
I REALLY wanted to read to just see if those are Lee, Tenten and Neji as his team-mates cos that sounds kinda amazing. Bear being mentally stunted due to fucked up coils and probably Guy's steroids, Nezumi a Tenten with some effed up history and Neji become a perv cos like... yes obviously, how are hyuuga not? Why are Hyuuga even let into the village, they can just peep under clothes ;p Pervy Neji over here probably saw mom and dad make him a brother when he unlocked his Byakugan way too early and thats how his fucked up started ;p
Kinda hoped that maybe Seru despite being monkey is a left fielded Orochimaru (since you seem to go with the silly Klark Kent idea of ANBU anonimity; i mean cmon just give Naruto fox mask not some edglorde emo teen crow. It's not like the whole city does not know who is the masked kid with golden chains sticking out his arse) but i doubt now since he is apparently genuinely a moron, honestly seems to be the Kakashi brand of moron even by his annoying bs.
But since this is just another pseudo-grey morality that ultimately goes full paladin story i think we all agree it's a pass. (Too many of those on the site, way too boring, why do people even bother, just go watch crappy original Naruto anime for that)
1/4/2023 c30 Guest
I always thought if some one is forced to use Izanagi the next step is to run ... as fast as you can... Any ways what's with the chains? How did it counter Kamui?
I always thought if some one is forced to use Izanagi the next step is to run ... as fast as you can... Any ways what's with the chains? How did it counter Kamui?
12/3/2022 c30 
2VividImagery
God this was a good read. not sure what some of the harsher reviews are on about, clearly some individuals failed by the school systems. Thoroughly Enjoyed, will come back again in like 2 years when my horrible memory allows me to experience this all over again.
2VividImageryGod this was a good read. not sure what some of the harsher reviews are on about, clearly some individuals failed by the school systems. Thoroughly Enjoyed, will come back again in like 2 years when my horrible memory allows me to experience this all over again.