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6/27/2021 c1 1EdwardsFirstKiss
One of my least favorite Edwards ever. He did not take Bella on a honeymoon and then whines about the marriage changing. And then Esme asks fior the rings back? I hope Bella moves on with Garrett and Edward is miserable with Tanya and has to witness their happiness. I am normally a B/E gal, but not this time. And I would love to read Aro's reaction to Tanya being the mom in his commercial and not Bella. Lol
1/18/2019 c1 1pauleen
Please add to this. A great beginning.
2/3/2016 c1 Nikki.Lynn.86
Loved this hope you add to it
6/4/2015 c1 Guest
omg, this is really good! Will you continue it? Pleaseeeee
9/29/2014 c1 Diannyi
Please Please continue this story. Looking forward for how things will turn out. I already looks like it will be so so good. Love it and cant wait for more
8/17/2014 c1 AliceCullen01
Continue it! Please! It has so much potential, I really wish I could keep reading.
7/19/2014 c1 eantl88
Great start for an expanded story. I will keep my fingers crossed that you will continue the story soon.
7/17/2014 c1 6cejsmom
Oh this is awesome. Can't wait to see how it all plays out. You've got a fantastic cast of characters.
7/17/2014 c1 Chilly Howdy
Hi Miss Maxie :)

Sorry I did have you on alert to read this story once you posted it. I loved it the first time around and certainly loving this time as well!

Oh boy! Edward Edward Edward. You said it yourself! You and Bella both failed at the marriage someone more than the other and now he is flaunting his new thing to his ex wife and kids at the same time! Very moronic of you Edward. I am glad there are other guys there noticing Bella. She is obviously a beautiful woman. I hope that Edward pulls finger out before Bella gets vested in someone else otherwise he just might lose her all together.

Please tell me you are going to continue with this awesome story?

I would like the rest of reviewers would love to see more!

Chilly x
7/5/2014 c1 yhan29
can't wait for the next chapters..there is a next chapter right!? :) love the story.. :)
7/2/2014 c1 carebear31374
Absolutely loved it. Cried in sections, just feeling so bad for Bella. But she has handled the situation much better then I would.

Can't wait to read more :))
7/2/2014 c1 natashar
lol cant wait for more
7/1/2014 c1 nebfan51
Yeah...this looks good...really good...I hope you continue it also :-)
7/1/2014 c1 4snoopylover60
Please tell me you are continuing this!

I love it and want more :)
7/1/2014 c1 juju76
Loving this story! I'm so glad you are back to writing! Oh how I have missed you! Hope all is well with you and your family!
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