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7/22/2015 c21 321abe
Great chapter
1/8/2015 c1 Jaksonic 5678
Story is good best fill for sonic Shantae earthbound klonoa and final fantasy how later till episode 2 not to be confused with chapter 2 I wanna see what happens next for fuck sake oh and not to mention that why is crash bandicoot not in it but hey I give it some credit
10/24/2014 c14 3Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
So the war was still going in Volk, huh?

Will they have to fight that robot that Klonoa fought in the game?

And what was the soldier's message to Porky?
10/24/2014 c14 9KaguTheGreat
Yay! I didn't realize the rest of the Earthbound gang was with Klonoa and Ness, but I'm glad they are.
10/21/2014 c13 KaguTheGreat
Wow. This is SO GOOD so far! I'm liking everything so far. It's the first time I've heard of Klonoa and more on Shantae, so this is really interesting! Shantae's hand-hair reminded me of Midna. I don't know if that was on purpose or not. And Ness is getting into the action! Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/20/2014 c13 3Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Well now looks like they'll have to fight Metal Sonic at Lunatea...

I'm surprised that Lolo didn't glomp on Klonoa after they've been reunited, actually.
9/18/2014 c12 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Well Sonic DID beat Perfect Chaos on his own TWICE (and he only needed the Emeralds the first time)! So I'm not that surprised of how easy it was for Sonic and Shantae to win.

Nega-Shantae? You mean the Final Boss of Risky's revenge?

Well... That was brutal... I mean: SHE SMASHED HER SKULL!

What new allies?
8/30/2014 c1 Elveeay
I like what you've done with this so far, but I personally think team evil needs more brainiacs. Dr. Wily, perhaps?... (Sorry If I've already commented this, I'm having wifi issues.)
8/24/2014 c11 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
So it really WAS Chaos! How did Eggman managed to both get Chaos and have Chaos be Perfect Chaos without the Emeralds?
8/24/2014 c10 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Well... If my memory serves me right, Rotty actually wears shorts.

Other than that, it's rather sweet to see that Shantae still sees her as a close friend. Awwwwwww...
8/21/2014 c9 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Ow... Good thing Risky never tried to choke Shantae in the games...

Wait! Does that mean that the vial has Chaos inside of it?! How is that possible?!

Btw: I see that you actually gave your story a cover page.
I can recognize Sonic, Shantae, Terra, Klonoa, Mario and Ness... But who's the last one? Is it Link?

Say... Do you know how to send PMs? If you don't, it's on the "Private Messaging" section of the sidebar on the left of the main account page.
8/17/2014 c8 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Ow! That one must've hurt!

The Tinkerbats sure are stupid... That must be the reason behind the barrels of the two Tinkertub battles of Risky's Revenge...
8/16/2014 c7 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
Well the first battle ended faster than I expected. Just one cannonball back at her and she leaves. I was expecting the ship to take more cannonballs before leaving.

Anyway. I suppose one of the masterminds is Porky and I don't think Giygas would count as a mastermind since he's almost mindless. So could the other one be?

Well she's back fast... Let's hope that this battle will last longer than just one deflected cannonball...
8/14/2014 c6 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
That was a close call of a landing... And somehow, no one woke up... Hard to believe...

So Porky really IS taking a part in this! WITH Giygas! MAYDAY! HELP! SOS! EMERGENCY! ALERT!

AND NOW THE LIGHTHOUSE'S GETTING SHOT! MAYDAY! HELP! SOS! EMERGENCY! ALERT! WARNING!
8/14/2014 c5 Lunatic-Over'9000'Lord
So Ness is involved, too... Does that mean that... NO! NOT GIYGAS AND PORKY!

Just small detail: Paula actually wears a short sleeved dress.

Who opened that dimensional hole in Ness' way?

Just when Sonic said a sarcastic line about someone smart knocking on the door, Jeff knocked on the door. I just LOVE these kind of jokes!
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