for Your Alpha8/7/2014 c9 
15Catsrawesome
I loved it! please update soon (but don't torture yourself!). I can't wait for more of this romance stuff! maybe her and Stormfly can become close friends and maybe some girl talk and- you know what, I will leave the story to you. LOL
15CatsrawesomeI loved it! please update soon (but don't torture yourself!). I can't wait for more of this romance stuff! maybe her and Stormfly can become close friends and maybe some girl talk and- you know what, I will leave the story to you. LOL
8/7/2014 c9 Mordooooh
I swear when I found out that a new chapter was out, I literally just got a sudden boost of adrenaline and without wasting a time read through the chapter word by word XD
Like every other chapters, it just gets better and better.
All those sleepless nights were finally worth it lol :)
I swear when I found out that a new chapter was out, I literally just got a sudden boost of adrenaline and without wasting a time read through the chapter word by word XD
Like every other chapters, it just gets better and better.
All those sleepless nights were finally worth it lol :)
8/7/2014 c9 2Cyclone Sword
I never expected to find a fic that would be as good as Lightning and Death Itself from Cke1st... I think you can even surpass him if you continue to writte like this.
Anyway, I would love to read more about Cloudjumper.
2Cyclone SwordI never expected to find a fic that would be as good as Lightning and Death Itself from Cke1st... I think you can even surpass him if you continue to writte like this.
Anyway, I would love to read more about Cloudjumper.
8/7/2014 c9 1Poseidon321
I would love to read more about Cloudjumper's relationship with Toothless, if you can fit it in.
1Poseidon321I would love to read more about Cloudjumper's relationship with Toothless, if you can fit it in.
8/7/2014 c9 Tess
Thank you, Cloudjumper, for so many funny situations :D I can't even imagine what the dragons and people on Berk would do when they hear about the Bewilderbeast. The last scene was really beautiful.
Thank you, Cloudjumper, for so many funny situations :D I can't even imagine what the dragons and people on Berk would do when they hear about the Bewilderbeast. The last scene was really beautiful.
8/5/2014 c1 Guest
can you PLEASE update, i'm really anxious to get to the next chapter, the suspense is KILLING me!
Please update or no cookies and brownies for you!
can you PLEASE update, i'm really anxious to get to the next chapter, the suspense is KILLING me!
Please update or no cookies and brownies for you!
8/3/2014 c8 Guest
Yes this story is very awesome just like the other toothless x oc storys you have. In all these storyies you have a night fury or a OC species like the snow fury, and water fury (both of those stories that include those are my favorites just saying) but anyways in one of those stories (impact) you also name two other OC species the earth fury, and the fire fury. I'm not saying you have to make story with them in it but I would like to see a story that includes them because they could some time in the lime light give it a twist almost everybody says another night fury I like those stories a lot but give us a curve ball I like seeing stories that people make from their own imagination. I'm not saying stop this story bye all means continue, I'm just saying maybe that's something to think about in the future
Yes this story is very awesome just like the other toothless x oc storys you have. In all these storyies you have a night fury or a OC species like the snow fury, and water fury (both of those stories that include those are my favorites just saying) but anyways in one of those stories (impact) you also name two other OC species the earth fury, and the fire fury. I'm not saying you have to make story with them in it but I would like to see a story that includes them because they could some time in the lime light give it a twist almost everybody says another night fury I like those stories a lot but give us a curve ball I like seeing stories that people make from their own imagination. I'm not saying stop this story bye all means continue, I'm just saying maybe that's something to think about in the future
8/3/2014 c8 Guest
Very interesting story so far. It does make sense to have valka understand dragons to cant wait to read the next chapter.
Very interesting story so far. It does make sense to have valka understand dragons to cant wait to read the next chapter.
8/1/2014 c8 4shadow343434
no problamo, i am still following and i hope you write much kore this is my favourite how to train your dragon fanfics.
4shadow343434no problamo, i am still following and i hope you write much kore this is my favourite how to train your dragon fanfics.