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8/1/2014 c8 QueenSaphire
I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! I agree with you on making Valka be able to understand the dragons, If that's all she heard for 22 years, she's gonna catch on.
7/31/2014 c7 alex
Great chapter
7/31/2014 c8 ObsessWitWeirdPa
You are a genius! I love the torture for the furies! Toothless is adorable
7/31/2014 c8 Mordred Render
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER! YOU NAILED IT YET AGAIN, HOW DO YOU DO THAT?! you never dissapoint in the slightest! YOUR STORIES ARE TOOO AMAZING! I absolutely love toothless and skyclimber when they are confused as mates! I even write the whole chapter down to read it everytime I want and because I don't have a printer! YOUR AMAZING
7/31/2014 c8 Mordooooh
Awwwww this chapter was just sooo cute and funny! This story is getting more an more interesting:D
I love it! Keep up the good work!
7/31/2014 c8 5One Bright Light
Dragons. *facepalms*
Hahaha, SkyClimber really made an entrance there! All mysterious and shy!
Love your writing! XD
7/30/2014 c8 ShortNinja13
This was a really good chapter! I loved how the other dragons immediately think that Skyclimber and Toothless are mates! I hope that they finally realize their attraction to one another and that there actually will be little hatchling Night Furies! Anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update again soon!
7/30/2014 c8 Cherryblossom21
aww wkwk
love it!
can't wait to read more!
keep up the good work and please update asap!
7/30/2014 c8 1Dragon Lord Draco
when i read that last part i laughed so hard i fell out of my bed
7/30/2014 c8 language
Hey, I liked what you put in your A.N.s, especially regarding Valka understanding dragonese. I'm sorry if I came off as pushy with my opinion; it's your story and you can obviously write it how you want to. It just felt like an unnecessary extra advantage for the dragons that felt like a bit of overkill. I mean, it's a story about Toothless and your OC, so how can Hiccup possibly be relevant if he's excluded from all of their conversations? It just felt kind of unfair to me. I liked this chapter though, although SkyClimber seems a bit like a one-trick pony since her two emotions seem to be embarrassment and indignation. I would love to see her interact with someone other than Toothless without talking about Toothless (think 'Bechdel test'), and I'm a dude. She's just not an overly deep character, so I don't expect much from her when her dialogue comes up. Regardless, keep up your good work!
7/30/2014 c8 15Catsrawesome
poor nightfuries. I can't wait until they actually get in some sort of relationship. this is an amazing story. can't wait for more!
7/30/2014 c8 11Remedy's Melody 109
Now tht is hilarious!
7/30/2014 c8 leah.fraser.1447
This. Is. Perfect. Take all the time you need, you made the characters like they are, I luv it. Luv it. LUV IT. Keep up the good work :D
7/30/2014 c8 FlyDon'tWalk
I have never reviewed a fanfiction in my life, but I believe this is worthy of one. Best story I've ever read. If you discontinue this I will kill myself. Keep up the good work, and if all your stories are as good as this one, you deserve a giant golden medal or something :D
7/30/2014 c8 9just-another-giraffe
haha, The ending is funny! Poor SkyClimber, getting surrounded. I guess the other dragons can't help it, they were curious. What's going to happen next? Please update soon!
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