for Your Alpha7/30/2014 c8 
1DustySands
Great chapter! Really fun to read and I love the long chapters! can't wait for more!
Really great story line and I love the reactions of the other dragons!
1DustySandsGreat chapter! Really fun to read and I love the long chapters! can't wait for more!
Really great story line and I love the reactions of the other dragons!
7/30/2014 c8 2NightsAnger
I just found this story to today and immediately loved it. I have read some of your other works (mostly the Snowflake ones) and I am glad to see that you are still writing great quality material. As for Valka understanding dragons, it seems that if she could understand dragons, Hiccup could too. Hiccup always wants to learn more about dragons and he has the background of being with Toothless. If Valka knew how to understand dragons Hiccup would have asked her to teach him. Seeing as you have already bottled yourself up and Hiccup doesn't understand dragons, maybe recent events would inspire/encourage him to learn. Plus it could be fun to have translation issues as he learns. Just an idea. Anyways thank you for another great story and your time spent in reading this really long review.
2NightsAngerI just found this story to today and immediately loved it. I have read some of your other works (mostly the Snowflake ones) and I am glad to see that you are still writing great quality material. As for Valka understanding dragons, it seems that if she could understand dragons, Hiccup could too. Hiccup always wants to learn more about dragons and he has the background of being with Toothless. If Valka knew how to understand dragons Hiccup would have asked her to teach him. Seeing as you have already bottled yourself up and Hiccup doesn't understand dragons, maybe recent events would inspire/encourage him to learn. Plus it could be fun to have translation issues as he learns. Just an idea. Anyways thank you for another great story and your time spent in reading this really long review.
7/30/2014 c8 Tess
Stop reading your stories? Are you serious? When I'm in bad mood, your stories always calm me, so no matter what happens, I'll always wait for next chapter :D Hasn't Toothless said that no one called him "Alpha Toothless" in one chapter (I don't know exactly)? But I'm looking forward to see how the situation on Berk will go
Stop reading your stories? Are you serious? When I'm in bad mood, your stories always calm me, so no matter what happens, I'll always wait for next chapter :D Hasn't Toothless said that no one called him "Alpha Toothless" in one chapter (I don't know exactly)? But I'm looking forward to see how the situation on Berk will go
7/30/2014 c8 mbh040
*Tries keep laughter in... failed* ROFL. enjoyed this chapter, ecspecially SkyClimbers introduction XD
*Tries keep laughter in... failed* ROFL. enjoyed this chapter, ecspecially SkyClimbers introduction XD
7/29/2014 c7 Cherryblossom21
amazinggggg!
i like it very much!
so cute i like how it turns out and it is well-written
please keep up the good work and update asap!
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amazinggggg!
i like it very much!
so cute i like how it turns out and it is well-written
please keep up the good work and update asap!
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7/26/2014 c7 4stxrdusty
Cuties! I am loving this so far! Fics with other Night Furys just make me so happy! And you came up with a great name for her. I'm excited for your next update! :)
4stxrdustyCuties! I am loving this so far! Fics with other Night Furys just make me so happy! And you came up with a great name for her. I'm excited for your next update! :)
7/25/2014 c7 1Dragon Lord Draco
awesome i love it you know judging by this story you could go professional author
1Dragon Lord Dracoawesome i love it you know judging by this story you could go professional author
7/25/2014 c7 1ObsessWitWeirdPairings
Hiccup was very much being Hiccup XD I loved the little scene you added with him! It was perfect! Don't stop!
1ObsessWitWeirdPairingsHiccup was very much being Hiccup XD I loved the little scene you added with him! It was perfect! Don't stop!
7/25/2014 c7 131st female scarlet speedster
Love it love it! Need more because its just too good! Super adorable!
131st female scarlet speedsterLove it love it! Need more because its just too good! Super adorable!
7/24/2014 c7 XenoXx
Funny chapter, certainly gave me a few laughs. Also, when Hiccup called Toothless a hatchling, was that a reference to Playing A Game You Can't Win? Because Hiccwarr (Who is based off of Hiccup) called Darkwing (currently known as Toothless) the same thing. I only noticed that because I read Playing A Game You Can't Win yesterday.
Funny chapter, certainly gave me a few laughs. Also, when Hiccup called Toothless a hatchling, was that a reference to Playing A Game You Can't Win? Because Hiccwarr (Who is based off of Hiccup) called Darkwing (currently known as Toothless) the same thing. I only noticed that because I read Playing A Game You Can't Win yesterday.
7/24/2014 c7 5MoonTrekerAF
YAY Hiccup! Lo mejor en mi POV fue Hiccup molestando y avergonzando a Chimuelo vez tras vez con SkyClimber y sus sentimientos; siempre me divierte ver a Chimuelo avergonzado.
Un tanto cómico también Hiccup haciendo sus propios diálogos con los dos reptiles parlando dragones.
La discusión entre Hiccup y SkyClimber fue entre comillas "reveladora", ya que muestra también parte de personalidad de ella y con eso, también parte de su perfil psicológico, además de que se puede otra su obvio acercamiento emotivo hacia Chimuelo.
Al parecer pasaron muchos días desde que Chimuelo dejó Berk en busca de la planta curativa cuyo nombre y especie es indeterminada, al punto en que Hiccup tuvo que ir a buscarlo con ayuda de Antorcha.
Hubiera comentado más el capítulo anterior pero después de hacer la pregunta, descubrí que solo puedo hacer un review por capítulo, que mal.
En fin, no hallo nada más que comentar al respecto y nos leeremos en tu próximo capítulo que al parecer será pronto YAY! Read ya later!
5MoonTrekerAFYAY Hiccup! Lo mejor en mi POV fue Hiccup molestando y avergonzando a Chimuelo vez tras vez con SkyClimber y sus sentimientos; siempre me divierte ver a Chimuelo avergonzado.
Un tanto cómico también Hiccup haciendo sus propios diálogos con los dos reptiles parlando dragones.
La discusión entre Hiccup y SkyClimber fue entre comillas "reveladora", ya que muestra también parte de personalidad de ella y con eso, también parte de su perfil psicológico, además de que se puede otra su obvio acercamiento emotivo hacia Chimuelo.
Al parecer pasaron muchos días desde que Chimuelo dejó Berk en busca de la planta curativa cuyo nombre y especie es indeterminada, al punto en que Hiccup tuvo que ir a buscarlo con ayuda de Antorcha.
Hubiera comentado más el capítulo anterior pero después de hacer la pregunta, descubrí que solo puedo hacer un review por capítulo, que mal.
En fin, no hallo nada más que comentar al respecto y nos leeremos en tu próximo capítulo que al parecer será pronto YAY! Read ya later!
7/24/2014 c6 131st female scarlet speedster
*applause* WONDERFUL WONDERFUL! You're hired! (don't ask me where that came from, its just dramatic effect ;P)
131st female scarlet speedster*applause* WONDERFUL WONDERFUL! You're hired! (don't ask me where that came from, its just dramatic effect ;P)
7/24/2014 c7 4Flying-Freely
The length doesn't matter when the content is amazing! I found this chapter very funny.
Great job, Proud.
4Flying-FreelyThe length doesn't matter when the content is amazing! I found this chapter very funny.
Great job, Proud.