for Your Alpha12/30/2014 c1 Guest
Please update this story
Please update this story
12/30/2014 c11 Guest
I hope you update soon. I love the story and I'm interested in what will happen next.
I hope you update soon. I love the story and I'm interested in what will happen next.
12/29/2014 c1 smaug
you see im an old school worm, keeping it real yo
you see im an old school worm, keeping it real yo
12/29/2014 c1 smaug
toothless is not a hero, he is a captive that lets filthy children ride him, toothless more like ballless
toothless is not a hero, he is a captive that lets filthy children ride him, toothless more like ballless
12/16/2014 c11 gx257
I loved the story so far please continue. I am really enjoying it
I loved the story so far please continue. I am really enjoying it
12/15/2014 c11 
4Lighty7
Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! If I could write half as well as you, I'd be a billionaire by now. A few crucial grammar mistakes, but those are common in any story.
Improvement can be made, though. You have the tendency to not describe things enough, like when we first meet a character or a scene.
I have problems with this issue as well. It's very difficult.
4Lighty7Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! If I could write half as well as you, I'd be a billionaire by now. A few crucial grammar mistakes, but those are common in any story.
Improvement can be made, though. You have the tendency to not describe things enough, like when we first meet a character or a scene.
I have problems with this issue as well. It's very difficult.
12/14/2014 c1 Guest
Will you update YOUR ALPHA
Will you update YOUR ALPHA
12/14/2014 c2 Lighty7
This is absolutely beautiful so far! I'm loving this! Hah I'm sure you'll pass me up on the review page soon! You deserve to at least! Breathtakingly beautiful!
This is absolutely beautiful so far! I'm loving this! Hah I'm sure you'll pass me up on the review page soon! You deserve to at least! Breathtakingly beautiful!
11/27/2014 c11 Guest
Please please please please please update pleaseeeee
Please please please please please update pleaseeeee
11/26/2014 c11 Guest
Please update this story soon. I would really like to know what happens next, I have a feeling that SkyClimber and Toothless will have to fight one another, but that is just a guess.
Please update this story soon. I would really like to know what happens next, I have a feeling that SkyClimber and Toothless will have to fight one another, but that is just a guess.
11/16/2014 c11 Guest
*Claps* Best. Story. EVAAH! Aw maw gawd i cant wait for next chapter o: dontcha dare to die in meanwhile,ur amazing writer,i give you 11/10.
*Claps* Best. Story. EVAAH! Aw maw gawd i cant wait for next chapter o: dontcha dare to die in meanwhile,ur amazing writer,i give you 11/10.
11/2/2014 c11 11Fencing Supplies
Duuuuuude. It is a cool story, and I love it. Please develope SkyClimber, please crank up the tension and sexual frustration, please start the suspense and please start updating again.
I am sitting her, just thinking of where this could go. Will there be another ultimate showdown, this time Toothless has to fight a controlled and beaten SkyClimber? Or maybe she will be kidnapped- while preggers - and lay the eggs far away in the dangerous nest... hmmmmm... maybe they will find more nightfuries so its not like, hey I like you just because your the last chick on earth, mayBE SHE REGAINS HER MEMORIES AND REMEMBERS HER FAMILY AND SHE HASS TO GO AND FIND THEM AND SHE GOT A SUPER PROTECTIVE DAD AND THEY DONT REALISE TOOTHLESS IS AN ALPHA DRAGON AND TREAT HIM LIKE A LITTLE CONTEMPT BUT HE IS JUST LIKE "LOL KEWL" AND THEN THEY REAALISE WHEN THE ALPHA ATTACKS OOMMMMGGGG. Like I said. So many posibilites. Start writing, start updating, and I will be a very happy camper. Seriously you pumped out a massive 60k in a month and now nothing. Please dont let it me cancer. Car crash? YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME YOU NEED TO LIVE YOU BEUTIFUL CREATURE.
Regards.
11Fencing SuppliesDuuuuuude. It is a cool story, and I love it. Please develope SkyClimber, please crank up the tension and sexual frustration, please start the suspense and please start updating again.
I am sitting her, just thinking of where this could go. Will there be another ultimate showdown, this time Toothless has to fight a controlled and beaten SkyClimber? Or maybe she will be kidnapped- while preggers - and lay the eggs far away in the dangerous nest... hmmmmm... maybe they will find more nightfuries so its not like, hey I like you just because your the last chick on earth, mayBE SHE REGAINS HER MEMORIES AND REMEMBERS HER FAMILY AND SHE HASS TO GO AND FIND THEM AND SHE GOT A SUPER PROTECTIVE DAD AND THEY DONT REALISE TOOTHLESS IS AN ALPHA DRAGON AND TREAT HIM LIKE A LITTLE CONTEMPT BUT HE IS JUST LIKE "LOL KEWL" AND THEN THEY REAALISE WHEN THE ALPHA ATTACKS OOMMMMGGGG. Like I said. So many posibilites. Start writing, start updating, and I will be a very happy camper. Seriously you pumped out a massive 60k in a month and now nothing. Please dont let it me cancer. Car crash? YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME YOU NEED TO LIVE YOU BEUTIFUL CREATURE.
Regards.
10/30/2014 c11 huge fan
I have read all your stories and I love you're writing style, although you could use a beta reader (hint) since you're spelling and grammar are not the best, no offense. besides that, I think you are Awesome and a GREAT writer.
I have read all your stories and I love you're writing style, although you could use a beta reader (hint) since you're spelling and grammar are not the best, no offense. besides that, I think you are Awesome and a GREAT writer.
10/10/2014 c11 slayer98
this story I find is one that touches a little part inside me because it is so well written. Love it!
this story I find is one that touches a little part inside me because it is so well written. Love it!