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1/19/2015 c2 3Nameless Angel 00
It's sloppy and has no plot and it seems as though you were writing this for a minute without even putting thought into it. I really think you should take this and try again because it dose seem like a nice idea.
7/3/2014 c1 NatNicole
Seems pretty cool. But could you change this chapter a bit? No offense, it just seems too rushed and so makes very little sense.

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