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7/10/2014 c3 24Mermaid's Magic
okay its kinda short? *Pouts* but on the bright side I like it? on and Kid isn't a Pedophile Conan is really Jimmy who is 17 years old... but he is in the body of a 7 year old? *Titles head* so he is a Pedophile? *grabs head* Great I just confused myself!
7/2/2014 c2 shotgun
Not a bad plot but it might be better if u elaborated more and used the quotation marks when the characters are talking. For example, "Help! My husband is having a seizure!"said the panicked woman.
7/2/2014 c2 Guest
Use quotation marks for dialogue.
Wow...Kid kidnapped Conan...
7/3/2014 c2 5Potteritis
Hmm that was really quite interesting mabey make your chapters longer though I m not one to talk sence mine aren't really that long but still
7/3/2014 c2 8YukiOnnaOfWinter
It seems pretty good so far :)
Please update soon. The only problems might be things like using speech marks and spell checks. Other than that I really like the start if your fanfiction!
7/2/2014 c2 24Mermaid's Magic
Loved it ahhhhh UPDATE SOON!
7/2/2014 c1 DemeterCat200
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Am I stupid if I don't get it? Why is Conan an emerald?! D:
7/2/2014 c1 Liliana Pelangi
Nee, that's not Tainte-kun but Tantei-kun and Kogaro must be Kogoro right?

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