for Wake Me Up7/15/2019 c1 Guest
This is awesome
This is awesome
1/6/2015 c1 Sarah
That made my heart hurt! And while that was set before season 3, I can see that conversation taking place after the date - after Oliver had pushed away. Felicity's righteous anger at Oliver regarding his tendency to make decisions for both of them and her speech about her giving him everything were well written.
That made my heart hurt! And while that was set before season 3, I can see that conversation taking place after the date - after Oliver had pushed away. Felicity's righteous anger at Oliver regarding his tendency to make decisions for both of them and her speech about her giving him everything were well written.
10/17/2014 c1 SarahSwifty13
I don't know where to start. Your writing is simply... astounding. I haven't really read any Arrow fics before and stumbling across one of yours was honestly such a pleasant surprise. I love the pacing of your stories (not just this one because I've been making my way down your list of one shots so far and enjoying myself at that) and admire how well you capture the characters and portray the intensity of their emotions. Looking forward to reading more of your incredible work! (:
I don't know where to start. Your writing is simply... astounding. I haven't really read any Arrow fics before and stumbling across one of yours was honestly such a pleasant surprise. I love the pacing of your stories (not just this one because I've been making my way down your list of one shots so far and enjoying myself at that) and admire how well you capture the characters and portray the intensity of their emotions. Looking forward to reading more of your incredible work! (:
8/9/2014 c1 nerdyloopy
next chapter please.
next chapter please.
7/13/2014 c1 Nath
Wow. That's beautiful.
You have to keep writing Arrow stuff, promise.
Wow. That's beautiful.
You have to keep writing Arrow stuff, promise.
7/4/2014 c1 
20Harleyzgirl
That was outstanding. Heartbreaking, but very realistic and well written. Thank you for sharing.
20HarleyzgirlThat was outstanding. Heartbreaking, but very realistic and well written. Thank you for sharing.
7/3/2014 c1 13YoureNotDoneFighting
Excuse me for a moment while I go compose myself..
This is so beautifully written — All of the emotions felt so raw and so real that it made my heart ache. This is Olicity fiction at its freaking finest. Thank you for sharing it with us!
13YoureNotDoneFightingExcuse me for a moment while I go compose myself..
This is so beautifully written — All of the emotions felt so raw and so real that it made my heart ache. This is Olicity fiction at its freaking finest. Thank you for sharing it with us!
7/3/2014 c1 Guest
This is an excellent story. I appreciated the way Felicity yelled at Oliver - he did go too far in finding her father without her permission. I was disappointed when her father turned out to be dead. That took the wind out of the story for me, yet I understand why you did it. This is not (I assume) a multi-chapter fic so killing her father was necessary in this instance to bring Oliver and Felicity together. The "missed opportunities" bit rang true. Still, it seems cruel to dangle a loving father in front of Felicity only to snatch him away from her. The fact that I care so much about this fictitious Felicity is due entirely to your impressive writing skills. Thanks for making my day.
This is an excellent story. I appreciated the way Felicity yelled at Oliver - he did go too far in finding her father without her permission. I was disappointed when her father turned out to be dead. That took the wind out of the story for me, yet I understand why you did it. This is not (I assume) a multi-chapter fic so killing her father was necessary in this instance to bring Oliver and Felicity together. The "missed opportunities" bit rang true. Still, it seems cruel to dangle a loving father in front of Felicity only to snatch him away from her. The fact that I care so much about this fictitious Felicity is due entirely to your impressive writing skills. Thanks for making my day.
7/3/2014 c1 belcheto
Your writing amazes me every time. How you create these worlds for Felicity and Oliver is genius.
Your writing amazes me every time. How you create these worlds for Felicity and Oliver is genius.
7/3/2014 c1 2Ivonnebagel12
So, you wouldn't happen to secretly be one of the writers for Arrow, would you? Because that would explain a lot. This right here was so believable, so in depth and just awesome.
Great, great job
2Ivonnebagel12So, you wouldn't happen to secretly be one of the writers for Arrow, would you? Because that would explain a lot. This right here was so believable, so in depth and just awesome.
Great, great job