for Lost in My Dreams5/17/2020 c18 Someone
My cold dead heart found this an entertaining read. Thank you
My cold dead heart found this an entertaining read. Thank you
3/15/2016 c18 Guest
Ok not trying to be rude but
Like
Fuck you.
Don't know if this broke my heart or broke my soul and mind.
This.
Just.
Good job.
Ok not trying to be rude but
Like
Fuck you.
Don't know if this broke my heart or broke my soul and mind.
This.
Just.
Good job.
4/1/2015 c18 Cheary
Is this really how it's going to end. Nevertheless, it was really good.
(Tbh, when I read the last part a second time all I thought of was "Mm watchya say..."
Is this really how it's going to end. Nevertheless, it was really good.
(Tbh, when I read the last part a second time all I thought of was "Mm watchya say..."
12/18/2014 c3 
13AnGellica A fan
I'm not sure if this story is done or not but I can't read the rest of it now... I just.
*Starts Crying*
I don't want italy to die
13AnGellica A fanI'm not sure if this story is done or not but I can't read the rest of it now... I just.
*Starts Crying*
I don't want italy to die
10/14/2014 c12 19Kawari Kisaki
hmmmm yes, this answers a good bit of my remaining questions... interesting.
please keep up the good work, I know you can do it!
19Kawari Kisakihmmmm yes, this answers a good bit of my remaining questions... interesting.
please keep up the good work, I know you can do it!
9/26/2014 c9 Kawari Kisaki
Interesting.
the numbers all finally come into play.
But it would seem I've reached the end of what's currently available, so I'll look forward to reading more.
Interesting.
the numbers all finally come into play.
But it would seem I've reached the end of what's currently available, so I'll look forward to reading more.
9/26/2014 c8 Kawari Kisaki
Again the target is listed among people that will die if said target isn't killed, it's less likely to be a coincidence then, but still possible.
And... I just feel really bad for Italy. But it bothers me how readily he accepted that he needed to kill Germany compared to Germany accepting that he needed to kill Italy... it's disconcerting. Something's definitely wrong with Italy...
Again the target is listed among people that will die if said target isn't killed, it's less likely to be a coincidence then, but still possible.
And... I just feel really bad for Italy. But it bothers me how readily he accepted that he needed to kill Germany compared to Germany accepting that he needed to kill Italy... it's disconcerting. Something's definitely wrong with Italy...
9/26/2014 c7 Kawari Kisaki
... Poor Italy.
Either he's just been tricked, or this is a major plot twist.
... Poor Italy.
Either he's just been tricked, or this is a major plot twist.
9/26/2014 c6 Kawari Kisaki
Ah here it is.
Danger. A reason why it makes sense Italy should be killed.
Also this is the only chapter so far with a title, I assume that's meaningful, but who knows, I suppose it could just be arbitrary.
Ah here it is.
Danger. A reason why it makes sense Italy should be killed.
Also this is the only chapter so far with a title, I assume that's meaningful, but who knows, I suppose it could just be arbitrary.
9/26/2014 c5 Kawari Kisaki
uh...
Not sure what to say about that one, just... uh... wow.
Interesting.
uh...
Not sure what to say about that one, just... uh... wow.
Interesting.
9/25/2014 c4 Kawari Kisaki
Ah finally Germany has been given something resembling an incentive to actually kill Italy. Everyone else will die if he doesn't, which he has no reason to believe besides the fact that he's very stressed, but that's fine, just the fact that there is a reason will probably push him forward.
Personally I find it somewhat confusing that the figure says that if Germany doesn't do as he's been asked that everyone here will die, then the figure goes on to list a few people. That in itself isn't confusing just that Italy is in that list. Up until this chapter this creepy figure hadn't directly mentioned that the person that had to be killed was Italy so if it hadn't been for that bit earlier when the figure had said 'or were you planning on getting a head start on killing him?' after talking about Italy then I would have taken the inclusion of Italy in that list to mean that the figure actually wasn't certain who the 'one closest to him' that he needed to kill was. It is a fairly vauge wording after all. But since it has now been made more clear that Italy is indeed the intended target his inclusion in the list would imply that perhaps by killing Italy in this dream world the real Italy can/will be saved in reality...
Or I'm just overthinking it.
Sorry for rambling so much.
Ah finally Germany has been given something resembling an incentive to actually kill Italy. Everyone else will die if he doesn't, which he has no reason to believe besides the fact that he's very stressed, but that's fine, just the fact that there is a reason will probably push him forward.
Personally I find it somewhat confusing that the figure says that if Germany doesn't do as he's been asked that everyone here will die, then the figure goes on to list a few people. That in itself isn't confusing just that Italy is in that list. Up until this chapter this creepy figure hadn't directly mentioned that the person that had to be killed was Italy so if it hadn't been for that bit earlier when the figure had said 'or were you planning on getting a head start on killing him?' after talking about Italy then I would have taken the inclusion of Italy in that list to mean that the figure actually wasn't certain who the 'one closest to him' that he needed to kill was. It is a fairly vauge wording after all. But since it has now been made more clear that Italy is indeed the intended target his inclusion in the list would imply that perhaps by killing Italy in this dream world the real Italy can/will be saved in reality...
Or I'm just overthinking it.
Sorry for rambling so much.
9/25/2014 c3 Kawari Kisaki
Just noticing... random small details keep changing... like at the begining of this chapter the conference room number mentioned is different from the one in chapter one, the colour of the hooded figure's eyes also changed. Also with the figure being hooded the first thing he notices probably wouldn't be the eyes...
That ending was cute, though foreboding. Definitely nice.
Just noticing... random small details keep changing... like at the begining of this chapter the conference room number mentioned is different from the one in chapter one, the colour of the hooded figure's eyes also changed. Also with the figure being hooded the first thing he notices probably wouldn't be the eyes...
That ending was cute, though foreboding. Definitely nice.
9/25/2014 c2 Kawari Kisaki
Ah so you actually did answer what I was wondering about last chapter. I had been confused why 'the only way to escape is to kill Italy' was bothering Germany so much when as of yet he wasn't really aware of anything he needed to escape from, I mean sure it was creepy but if it didn't apply to his current situation as far as he was aware then it shouldn't really have mattered. But that was mentioned in the beginning of this chapter.
So... This is just an assumption based on what I've read so far but at least for the beginning Germany is going to be going between dreams and reality without it being entirely clear which is which, or if they're both actually dreams... that's probably wrong, that's just what it looks like.
Also it'll be sad to see Germany actually kill Italy... poor Italy...
Ah so you actually did answer what I was wondering about last chapter. I had been confused why 'the only way to escape is to kill Italy' was bothering Germany so much when as of yet he wasn't really aware of anything he needed to escape from, I mean sure it was creepy but if it didn't apply to his current situation as far as he was aware then it shouldn't really have mattered. But that was mentioned in the beginning of this chapter.
So... This is just an assumption based on what I've read so far but at least for the beginning Germany is going to be going between dreams and reality without it being entirely clear which is which, or if they're both actually dreams... that's probably wrong, that's just what it looks like.
Also it'll be sad to see Germany actually kill Italy... poor Italy...