for The Little Viking(Title May Change)7/11/2014 c2 a random person
Nice story so far :) that's a cool idea for a series! Please update soon!
Nice story so far :) that's a cool idea for a series! Please update soon!
7/11/2014 c2 Animefan12
I thought about Hunchback of Notre Dame, but then the gypsy falls for the captain instead of Quasimodo. But I guess u could twist it. Pease consider it and I love Disney movies! Oh! And a few other considerations, if u haven't thought about these, are Pocahontas, Brave, and W.A.L.L.E. I hope I don't seem too demanding.
I thought about Hunchback of Notre Dame, but then the gypsy falls for the captain instead of Quasimodo. But I guess u could twist it. Pease consider it and I love Disney movies! Oh! And a few other considerations, if u haven't thought about these, are Pocahontas, Brave, and W.A.L.L.E. I hope I don't seem too demanding.
7/12/2014 c1 
13K-the-Queen-of-Typos
1)Hm. I drink tea more than hot chocolate, so I'll go with that.
2)I'd believe her and let her go on with the story.
3) so far I really like it .
13K-the-Queen-of-Typos1)Hm. I drink tea more than hot chocolate, so I'll go with that.
2)I'd believe her and let her go on with the story.
3) so far I really like it .
7/4/2014 c1 Animefan12
Awesome!
Awesome!
7/4/2014 c1 Shiro0Neko
I absolutely loved it. I can't sign in because I'm on my phone, so I'll review as an anonymous.
I drank hot chocolate :P and I'm eager to hear the story.
You write very well, you certainly know how to tell a story. I'm waiting to see how you write Toothless, it's always interesting.
I absolutely loved it. I can't sign in because I'm on my phone, so I'll review as an anonymous.
I drank hot chocolate :P and I'm eager to hear the story.
You write very well, you certainly know how to tell a story. I'm waiting to see how you write Toothless, it's always interesting.
7/4/2014 c1 6Kathryn Mills
interesting start, not many people go for the first person perspective, hope to read the actual story soon :-)
6Kathryn Millsinteresting start, not many people go for the first person perspective, hope to read the actual story soon :-)