for Save Me9/7/2016 c6 Guest
What a creep I hope Jake beats His ass
What a creep I hope Jake beats His ass
9/5/2016 c6 Debbie Hicks
7.
Chapter 7.
CRUNCHED many as all mazilliond bites bruies cuts scars and all of the sudden bled to death badly then Edward found me a corpse with then a moe monstrous alien transformation began to take hold of my own bruied body ten suddenly shreeded away then drained the Goddess Artemis selected me as her priestess then transformed into a Vampire slayer Artemis I need help please I sacffice thyself make me a Slayer I spoken Greek from my host fluent then BITTEN The Remains was transformed into m poisonous blood burned then myself became a Vampire slayer my hair gre ten more inches longr ten the rest were bangs Alice my bag ouch shredded AS ALL OF SKIN THEN MY BLOOD WAS DEADLY PASSED OUTSIDE without bot shattering but suddenly with best friends bi urstin g freely drained of blood the remains suddenly burned for the gods and goddeses tramsfoprm us into slayers and hunters who destroy Vampires shattering crashing freely then punished with siblings then blacked outside then taken then had as all of enhanced sens smell taste touch hearing sight smell as all of the tasting ten too late let loose a roaring soundwave hissing really wildly you are as all of punished what is she I am a Huntress of Artemis with THIS WEAPON DEMON! tHE WEAPON WAS A Lirpa I was not human but a Vulcan woman begopne Verkast from VULCAN! Momma mia Sir! THEN blazing then popped but bleeding to death badly scarred Alice what she is holding a Lirpa in Tragically Gaea's Green blood oh my god Bella you beaten my mate Felix what you say Bella if te Dawn of our all tomorrows as in the beginning as it is today to you my husband if shall be will constrate will be be who I am I shall make my choice this one that he walked to te gong if on the planet Vulcan from the host's telepathic signal Kail-FLieee! sounded llke T'Pring in her wedding robes Then my voice sounded really alien but Vulcan if the dawn of all our tomorrows as in the beginning I as it is today to you my husband will constrate who I am I shall make thy choise This One that was it chosen a Champion my truest not so human boyfriend acted like T'Pring in her wedding Vulcan ritual robes I found Emmett what is it a Lirpa yes husband oh crap he is Vulcan Bella you chosen marriage who are you I am your priestess these robes are from a 1984 cosplay you are holding a lirpa yes that I wore I was healed he was Spock I was T'Pring Micheal we are split eaten by Le-Matyas I belong to Spock my husband you look like her oh my god I am with Jessica bonded what is a Le-Matya a dangerous creature roams Vulcan you researched yes became a Trekker Momma mia Garrett good god I am drawing of them as Vulcans he was t right from hunting animals took a course in college the other coven were honored to have him as a family member then it was sent into computers of myself with him with four little Vulcan children residing in Shi'kahr and Gol with Mount Seleya oh no what is she she is his mate wife andconsorted to Sch'n T'Gai Spock that was it the news were hot on our secret meeting was private that I healed faster than normal holy toldeo you ok I adapt Jasper Oh my god you look difrent it healed fast easy with Lady T'Lat yes the small child boy that is worse what this you are abused by him then herself placed a Mind meld link to Edward to lock as a mated couple red alert in our heads I think we have a healer Doctor Carlisle Cullen be Lady T'Lar's healer yes I was in a healing trance a strange warbling noise myself felt a devoid of emotions Alice she is entering a trance while injured her body is altered to look like a Vulcan woman she enjoys Star Trek a ton wore robes looks like from te Kir sector of the planet Vulcan the Vulcan captain's first officer was very tall and Muscular sworn to protect me from danger That the boy was looking for a thing found it oh my god ten I was purged from my system that reawaken healed oh my head Edward I thought-sent via telepathy yes rest that my healing began a fan fim based on from their myths was created I could speak a lot of Vulcan words and phrases I was a noble daughter of a mindlord King was my own father casted he too fluent in the Vulcan language a supernatural romance of a princess and a War beast king was my Undead boyfriend Sir! she is with him healing together are Thy'la Ensign yes sir Daughter you are dressed in such rich robes Father you are dressed I look really weird like a king yes from Return of the King needle please then ow with her with both then the testing you are desecendants from Scottish blood from your ancestors Crap took my green blood I look like a War king of Vulcan he too wore pointed ears had hair fixed undercover hello Renee you too tested with him that my own mother the flighty but horny Renee Dwyer acted you guessed it Luwaxana Troi hello little one Mother I told you don't call me that Great entrance in what robes Husband mother's here with her newest husband dear you took two one Vulcan other Betazoid gasp sorry Bella I am her other husband she what fainted oh man that is weird crud sorry team mind I park in I am Miran that was a interspecies of extraterrestrials Angela was Bajoran had a thing on her ear Jessica was Capellan Lauren was Iotian Diego was Ba'ku dressed from Witness herself dessed from Time Trax te small child was little her father a Ambassdor it was a health meeting and counsel O Boy this is fun Crap you heal fast yes.
7.
Chapter 7.
CRUNCHED many as all mazilliond bites bruies cuts scars and all of the sudden bled to death badly then Edward found me a corpse with then a moe monstrous alien transformation began to take hold of my own bruied body ten suddenly shreeded away then drained the Goddess Artemis selected me as her priestess then transformed into a Vampire slayer Artemis I need help please I sacffice thyself make me a Slayer I spoken Greek from my host fluent then BITTEN The Remains was transformed into m poisonous blood burned then myself became a Vampire slayer my hair gre ten more inches longr ten the rest were bangs Alice my bag ouch shredded AS ALL OF SKIN THEN MY BLOOD WAS DEADLY PASSED OUTSIDE without bot shattering but suddenly with best friends bi urstin g freely drained of blood the remains suddenly burned for the gods and goddeses tramsfoprm us into slayers and hunters who destroy Vampires shattering crashing freely then punished with siblings then blacked outside then taken then had as all of enhanced sens smell taste touch hearing sight smell as all of the tasting ten too late let loose a roaring soundwave hissing really wildly you are as all of punished what is she I am a Huntress of Artemis with THIS WEAPON DEMON! tHE WEAPON WAS A Lirpa I was not human but a Vulcan woman begopne Verkast from VULCAN! Momma mia Sir! THEN blazing then popped but bleeding to death badly scarred Alice what she is holding a Lirpa in Tragically Gaea's Green blood oh my god Bella you beaten my mate Felix what you say Bella if te Dawn of our all tomorrows as in the beginning as it is today to you my husband if shall be will constrate will be be who I am I shall make my choice this one that he walked to te gong if on the planet Vulcan from the host's telepathic signal Kail-FLieee! sounded llke T'Pring in her wedding robes Then my voice sounded really alien but Vulcan if the dawn of all our tomorrows as in the beginning I as it is today to you my husband will constrate who I am I shall make thy choise This One that was it chosen a Champion my truest not so human boyfriend acted like T'Pring in her wedding Vulcan ritual robes I found Emmett what is it a Lirpa yes husband oh crap he is Vulcan Bella you chosen marriage who are you I am your priestess these robes are from a 1984 cosplay you are holding a lirpa yes that I wore I was healed he was Spock I was T'Pring Micheal we are split eaten by Le-Matyas I belong to Spock my husband you look like her oh my god I am with Jessica bonded what is a Le-Matya a dangerous creature roams Vulcan you researched yes became a Trekker Momma mia Garrett good god I am drawing of them as Vulcans he was t right from hunting animals took a course in college the other coven were honored to have him as a family member then it was sent into computers of myself with him with four little Vulcan children residing in Shi'kahr and Gol with Mount Seleya oh no what is she she is his mate wife andconsorted to Sch'n T'Gai Spock that was it the news were hot on our secret meeting was private that I healed faster than normal holy toldeo you ok I adapt Jasper Oh my god you look difrent it healed fast easy with Lady T'Lat yes the small child boy that is worse what this you are abused by him then herself placed a Mind meld link to Edward to lock as a mated couple red alert in our heads I think we have a healer Doctor Carlisle Cullen be Lady T'Lar's healer yes I was in a healing trance a strange warbling noise myself felt a devoid of emotions Alice she is entering a trance while injured her body is altered to look like a Vulcan woman she enjoys Star Trek a ton wore robes looks like from te Kir sector of the planet Vulcan the Vulcan captain's first officer was very tall and Muscular sworn to protect me from danger That the boy was looking for a thing found it oh my god ten I was purged from my system that reawaken healed oh my head Edward I thought-sent via telepathy yes rest that my healing began a fan fim based on from their myths was created I could speak a lot of Vulcan words and phrases I was a noble daughter of a mindlord King was my own father casted he too fluent in the Vulcan language a supernatural romance of a princess and a War beast king was my Undead boyfriend Sir! she is with him healing together are Thy'la Ensign yes sir Daughter you are dressed in such rich robes Father you are dressed I look really weird like a king yes from Return of the King needle please then ow with her with both then the testing you are desecendants from Scottish blood from your ancestors Crap took my green blood I look like a War king of Vulcan he too wore pointed ears had hair fixed undercover hello Renee you too tested with him that my own mother the flighty but horny Renee Dwyer acted you guessed it Luwaxana Troi hello little one Mother I told you don't call me that Great entrance in what robes Husband mother's here with her newest husband dear you took two one Vulcan other Betazoid gasp sorry Bella I am her other husband she what fainted oh man that is weird crud sorry team mind I park in I am Miran that was a interspecies of extraterrestrials Angela was Bajoran had a thing on her ear Jessica was Capellan Lauren was Iotian Diego was Ba'ku dressed from Witness herself dessed from Time Trax te small child was little her father a Ambassdor it was a health meeting and counsel O Boy this is fun Crap you heal fast yes.
9/5/2016 c6 Guest
OOOHHH FOR FUCKSAKE! Why must Bella always be the weak na useless damsel in destress/victim that gets hurt all the time? Why not writting a version with her being turned into a vampire by Laurent at New Moon's Chapter 10? Now that is how the original should've been wrote, if Stephanie Meyer wasn't a melodramatic and mysoginist bitch.
OOOHHH FOR FUCKSAKE! Why must Bella always be the weak na useless damsel in destress/victim that gets hurt all the time? Why not writting a version with her being turned into a vampire by Laurent at New Moon's Chapter 10? Now that is how the original should've been wrote, if Stephanie Meyer wasn't a melodramatic and mysoginist bitch.
9/5/2016 c6 serenity1006
I'm kind of confused? Is Jake even in this story, because all I'm reading is Mike and Edward. Not even sure how Jake will even fit in at this point when obviously Edward wants to be her savior.
I'm kind of confused? Is Jake even in this story, because all I'm reading is Mike and Edward. Not even sure how Jake will even fit in at this point when obviously Edward wants to be her savior.
9/13/2015 c5 corkykellems
What a jerk...can't wait till He get's His rear kicked...I hope it's by Jake
What a jerk...can't wait till He get's His rear kicked...I hope it's by Jake
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