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12/14/2014 c1 sayRAH
Fluff levels were just right. Who am I kidding there is no right only more. Tildie I don't remember her from the show is she OC?
12/6/2014 c2 sayRAH
Emma blushing. Emily couldn't possibly get any cuter. Logan is ecchi baka.
11/12/2014 c1 Inka chan
Emily kawaii
Tildie kawaii
10/31/2014 c2 Inka chan
Kawaii so much kawaii
Emily kawaii
Logan dirty minded baka
Emma so pure tsundere kawaii
Tildie kawaii
Bobby baka
Forge baka
11/2/2014 c2 cybercorpsesnake
Sorry for the late review.

Emily is so cute in her little panther costume. Emma must have looked wonderful. Logan is definitely going to pay for that oh boy will Logan pay for that. He was definitely checking Miss Prim and Proper out as she was getting into the van. Logan feels genuine that he is treasuring these moments of peace. Egging to house was hilarious. Nice pacing and dialogue. Bobby and Forge are going to have a great time.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
11/1/2014 c2 Love-is-power-down-with-hate
Soooooo cute. Logan you dirty minded old man better tell Emma she is beautiful. Emily couldn't get cuter in her little outfit. The cuteness is so good.

Ps. Sorry if yesterday was a drunken incoherent mess.
11/1/2014 c2 Vintorez
They got those little girls good. Next time they should use them for more free candy. Logan is going to pay for that. Emma could use the same thoughts to plague his dreams with very steamy shows but Logan gets no happy ending. Emily was so cute in her little costume.
10/17/2014 c1 Vintorez
Fluff is good don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
10/15/2014 c1 Love-is-power-down-with-hate
Emily and Tildie are so cute. Is Tildie of? Emma is cute Logan please notice that
7/21/2014 c1 cybercorpsesnake
Really cute chapter. The two of them becoming friends and playing together. Needs work on the paragraphs. There are no mistakes that I have picked out.

Keep up the good work.

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