for Click4/22/2016 c1 Guest
slitherinshadowhunter67 while I will concede that reading is a hobby she has she read one book through out the entire series for fun before her life was nothing but Edward, taking care of your kid isn't a hobby it's a necessity unless she wants to be the worst mom ever (plus I'm sure most moms wouldn't appreciate their job being dumbed down to just a hobby because that's actual work) and hanging out with anybody has never been a hobby let alone her "new" family. You just named off things she does that revolve around Edward which is pretty much how the books are written, Bella has nothing without Edward. So you should either A) realize that the book paint Bella as an over obsessed girl with no life without her boyfriend or B) take your time and opinions to an actual story you'd like and save everyone the time from having to skip over your comment because it's pretty much mindless hate.
slitherinshadowhunter67 while I will concede that reading is a hobby she has she read one book through out the entire series for fun before her life was nothing but Edward, taking care of your kid isn't a hobby it's a necessity unless she wants to be the worst mom ever (plus I'm sure most moms wouldn't appreciate their job being dumbed down to just a hobby because that's actual work) and hanging out with anybody has never been a hobby let alone her "new" family. You just named off things she does that revolve around Edward which is pretty much how the books are written, Bella has nothing without Edward. So you should either A) realize that the book paint Bella as an over obsessed girl with no life without her boyfriend or B) take your time and opinions to an actual story you'd like and save everyone the time from having to skip over your comment because it's pretty much mindless hate.
4/23/2016 c9 
2nashmeira
Well this is an interesting take and I'll admit it's a twist on the vampire story, or well twilight's version of vampire. I kinda like it. But well have to see what happens in the end with James and the others. I'm wondering if Bella does get turned in some way in the end of the story, and then has to learn to live with it while she is still in Forks. Basing that in vampires being difrent so why not what happens when someone is turned. Sorry rambling. But I do hope you are able to see Tue story through to completion.
2nashmeiraWell this is an interesting take and I'll admit it's a twist on the vampire story, or well twilight's version of vampire. I kinda like it. But well have to see what happens in the end with James and the others. I'm wondering if Bella does get turned in some way in the end of the story, and then has to learn to live with it while she is still in Forks. Basing that in vampires being difrent so why not what happens when someone is turned. Sorry rambling. But I do hope you are able to see Tue story through to completion.
10/7/2014 c1 Guest
Great story! Engaging!
Great story! Engaging!
7/30/2014 c1 6slytherinshadowhunter67
Umm, Bella has hobbies outside of staring and breathing, such as reading, taking care of Renesmee, hanging out with her new family, etc.
6slytherinshadowhunter67Umm, Bella has hobbies outside of staring and breathing, such as reading, taking care of Renesmee, hanging out with her new family, etc.
7/10/2014 c1 Monii
I like your book so far hope you continue to post.
I like your book so far hope you continue to post.
7/8/2014 c1 Guest
Great start! Please continue.
Great start! Please continue.