for The Heart of a Soldier: Rewritten5/10/2015 c5 
7LovingBOBThePacific
Hey Becca-Boone! Good to see you updating again, and my, it's beyond fantastic! :D
I really hope that you and your family are good.
I miss you very much, and I'm really sorry that we haven't got to talk in a long time. I really hope we will when summer holidays comes. Love you to the moon and back!
- Camz xx
7LovingBOBThePacificHey Becca-Boone! Good to see you updating again, and my, it's beyond fantastic! :D
I really hope that you and your family are good.
I miss you very much, and I'm really sorry that we haven't got to talk in a long time. I really hope we will when summer holidays comes. Love you to the moon and back!
- Camz xx
5/9/2015 c5 Paratrooper56
Oh my gosh hon, you updated, I love you to bits. :P
As always, this story was amazing and the rework will be even better I'm sure. Keep writing, I don't give two craps is there are massive hiatuses in between chapters, I love the story so much hahaha.
Xxoo ;) Paratrooper56
Oh my gosh hon, you updated, I love you to bits. :P
As always, this story was amazing and the rework will be even better I'm sure. Keep writing, I don't give two craps is there are massive hiatuses in between chapters, I love the story so much hahaha.
Xxoo ;) Paratrooper56
4/17/2015 c4 JackyBoy
This is a fantastic story!
I love the attention to detail you provide in the early chapters about Esther's motivations for joining the army, as well as how it is she was able to be in the army - so many stories lack that initial care and suffer for it, but yours is so great!
I realise you haven't updated for quite some time now, but I thought I would tell you how much I really really enjoy the 4 chapters you have up at the moment anyway (and hey, if that inspires you to update again, all the better) - I'm going to check out your other stories right now :D
Keep writing, you're fantastic!
This is a fantastic story!
I love the attention to detail you provide in the early chapters about Esther's motivations for joining the army, as well as how it is she was able to be in the army - so many stories lack that initial care and suffer for it, but yours is so great!
I realise you haven't updated for quite some time now, but I thought I would tell you how much I really really enjoy the 4 chapters you have up at the moment anyway (and hey, if that inspires you to update again, all the better) - I'm going to check out your other stories right now :D
Keep writing, you're fantastic!
4/13/2015 c4 mngirl
Hahaha your author's note made me laugh! Please update soon! You've come a LONG way in your writing and I would LOVE to read more! Although, yeah, junior year is crazy busy...I'm in the middle of mine too! Happy writing!
Hahaha your author's note made me laugh! Please update soon! You've come a LONG way in your writing and I would LOVE to read more! Although, yeah, junior year is crazy busy...I'm in the middle of mine too! Happy writing!
11/29/2014 c4 15cchickki
Yay! So excited to see that you updated! I just love, love, love the way you write! I really enjoyed this chapter, it was a nice look at Esther's continuing development and interactions with the boys.
Also, thank you for keeping things realistic. It's a breath of fresh air to read a BoB fic that has some sense of accuracy lol. I hope to see you update again soon, I just adore this story :) keep up the good work!
15cchickkiYay! So excited to see that you updated! I just love, love, love the way you write! I really enjoyed this chapter, it was a nice look at Esther's continuing development and interactions with the boys.
Also, thank you for keeping things realistic. It's a breath of fresh air to read a BoB fic that has some sense of accuracy lol. I hope to see you update again soon, I just adore this story :) keep up the good work!
11/29/2014 c4 Paratrooper56
Hey,
YAY! Another chapter! I love where this story is going and far out brussel sprout I love te way the boys are already protective ;) Bull is adorable, he already is but you make him much more so. Good luck with driving and every other hectic thing, I find this time of the year is crazy anyways without the added load of crap that life seems to enjoy dumping on us :P That was a weirdo ramble I know but think of it as my good-luck-I-hope-you-don't-die-with-the-craziness-of-this-time-of-year speech :D (I always seem to) :P
So ecstatic you posted another chapter an scant wait for Essie gal to meet our old pal Tab...
Cya, Paratrooper56
Hey,
YAY! Another chapter! I love where this story is going and far out brussel sprout I love te way the boys are already protective ;) Bull is adorable, he already is but you make him much more so. Good luck with driving and every other hectic thing, I find this time of the year is crazy anyways without the added load of crap that life seems to enjoy dumping on us :P That was a weirdo ramble I know but think of it as my good-luck-I-hope-you-don't-die-with-the-craziness-of-this-time-of-year speech :D (I always seem to) :P
So ecstatic you posted another chapter an scant wait for Essie gal to meet our old pal Tab...
Cya, Paratrooper56
11/29/2014 c4 7LovingBOBThePacific
I thought it was a great chap, darling! Good to see you get some writing done. I hope I'll be able to update soon as well. Great work, sweetie - keep it up! :D
-Camz
7LovingBOBThePacificI thought it was a great chap, darling! Good to see you get some writing done. I hope I'll be able to update soon as well. Great work, sweetie - keep it up! :D
-Camz
11/21/2014 c3 cchickki
I really miss reading this fanfic, it was really off to a great start! I hope to see you update again soon! :)
I really miss reading this fanfic, it was really off to a great start! I hope to see you update again soon! :)
8/29/2014 c3 Guest
Please update. It is so much better than the original. Please keep updating soon
Please update. It is so much better than the original. Please keep updating soon
8/18/2014 c3 2TawnyOwl117
Hi, so I tend to be one of the silent readers but after reading this I couldn't not review. Having read your first version of the this story I don't think that I expected such a huge difference. I love how you have fleshed out the story as well as your characters. Your writing is amazing and I will be waiting on tender hooks until you update next. :)
2TawnyOwl117Hi, so I tend to be one of the silent readers but after reading this I couldn't not review. Having read your first version of the this story I don't think that I expected such a huge difference. I love how you have fleshed out the story as well as your characters. Your writing is amazing and I will be waiting on tender hooks until you update next. :)
8/6/2014 c3 Paratrooper56
Hey there! Yay, glad you're back :D Loved this Chapter, I know there is no need to gush about your writing skills because I know they're perfect (seriously, you edit and write so well;) but I must point put that I loved the way you potrayed the characters. Sweet ole Shifty there was perfect and so was all of them. To be frank I wish the show had shown a bit more of Shifty but hey, we can't have it all! (ahaha, I love every single one of the boys;) Good luck with school btw :D cya Paratrooper56
Hey there! Yay, glad you're back :D Loved this Chapter, I know there is no need to gush about your writing skills because I know they're perfect (seriously, you edit and write so well;) but I must point put that I loved the way you potrayed the characters. Sweet ole Shifty there was perfect and so was all of them. To be frank I wish the show had shown a bit more of Shifty but hey, we can't have it all! (ahaha, I love every single one of the boys;) Good luck with school btw :D cya Paratrooper56
8/4/2014 c3 15cchickki
Happy to see you updated! Wow, another great and amazingly detailed chapter! Glad Esther is finally talking to the men. Shifty is so sweet to help her out, and it's nice to see a bond already forming between her and Tab. I'm loving this story so far - can't wait for the next chapter! :)
15cchickkiHappy to see you updated! Wow, another great and amazingly detailed chapter! Glad Esther is finally talking to the men. Shifty is so sweet to help her out, and it's nice to see a bond already forming between her and Tab. I'm loving this story so far - can't wait for the next chapter! :)
8/4/2014 c3 7LovingBOBThePacific
Gosh, my darling. You may not believe me, but your writing has developed SO much. It flows well and the chapters are beautifully written. This story is going to be amazing - I know it, trust me :3
Well, I'm exhausted but also happy from the first day of the handball school - "only" four more to go ;)
Keep up the good work, Becca Boone!
Love you, miss you! :3
Yours,
Camz xxx
7LovingBOBThePacificGosh, my darling. You may not believe me, but your writing has developed SO much. It flows well and the chapters are beautifully written. This story is going to be amazing - I know it, trust me :3
Well, I'm exhausted but also happy from the first day of the handball school - "only" four more to go ;)
Keep up the good work, Becca Boone!
Love you, miss you! :3
Yours,
Camz xxx