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12/22/2018 c1 2writingisrelaxing
I mean, you have _a lot_ of grammar errors, but I was enjoying the story a lot! The idea is so original and interesting, I love it! And maybe the sentences are not built correctly, but the scenes themselves are good. I can tell that if you wrote this in your native language, it would feel like literature. It's really sad that you didn't continue this. I wonder what Kowalski had planned...
7/13/2014 c1 74Extreme Light 9
This is really good. Update soon!
7/13/2014 c1 34thewriterstory
Hehe nice! Love this! :)
Two things you wanna correct :)
Private nodded with an uncertain face.
Are you sure if it will be saFe. (not save)
7/13/2014 c1 32Mikadaphne28
He he, this is sooo cute! *cuddles!* Good luck on school though...
Layla ;)

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