for One Day More (Of School): A Parody9/17/2014 c1 
57hollybridgetpeppermint
Aww, it's too bad you couldn't convince your class to sing it! That would have been awesome!
A minor tip: Mostly you've got this down, but occasionally there's a word whose stress is on the wrong syllable. For example: "I've enough knowledge for my brain." The beat of the song is on the syllable "E" in "enough," so if you sing it, it sounds like, "I've E-nough KNOW-ledge FOR my BRAIN." However, when you say the word "enough," you say it like, "e-NOUGH." When you write songs, you want to match the stress in the word to the stress in the song.
That said, I enjoyed this very much! My favorite part, I think, was Marius' "My grades are good, I pass with you!" Nicely done! :D
You can always try again to convince a class to sing this next year. XD
hbpm
57hollybridgetpeppermintAww, it's too bad you couldn't convince your class to sing it! That would have been awesome!
A minor tip: Mostly you've got this down, but occasionally there's a word whose stress is on the wrong syllable. For example: "I've enough knowledge for my brain." The beat of the song is on the syllable "E" in "enough," so if you sing it, it sounds like, "I've E-nough KNOW-ledge FOR my BRAIN." However, when you say the word "enough," you say it like, "e-NOUGH." When you write songs, you want to match the stress in the word to the stress in the song.
That said, I enjoyed this very much! My favorite part, I think, was Marius' "My grades are good, I pass with you!" Nicely done! :D
You can always try again to convince a class to sing this next year. XD
hbpm
7/17/2014 c1 8JavertInMiniature
I'll be a senior this year, and this will be pretty much perfect to do with my classmates. I love this.
8JavertInMiniatureI'll be a senior this year, and this will be pretty much perfect to do with my classmates. I love this.