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7/29/2014 c2 15GeekyGenius
I really like how Phoenix spells things out like Pearls. Nice touch :) I just can't get over the adorableness of young Mia and Phoenix
7/28/2014 c2 1Moriarty Joria
There was something remarkably perfect and very touching about the moment at the beginning of this chapter, with the "hiiis-torik-al-valyu" exchange. It felt real and very childlike. I greatly enjoyed it.
7/28/2014 c1 15GeekyGenius
I think the mystic that was a friend of Emily's was probably Bikini or Maya's mum. And I think the older girl was Mia, since Maya probably wasn't born yet (or was like 1) as she is 7 years younger than Phoenix.
7/15/2014 c1 1Moriarty Joria
This was totally unexpected, which I absolutely love. It's refreshing and intriguing, and I can't wait to read more! Brava!
7/13/2014 c1 26Justaway Ninja
Hmm. Curious. I'd like to see where you're going with this... :) Pretty good un-edited. :) Keep it up!

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