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for The grandson off Madara Uchiha and Hashirama Senju

4/8/2016 c2 1yuzukikuran476
Please update
4/8/2016 c1 yuzukikuran476
Instead of Rebecca what about kazumi and
I wonder if Kurama help Naruto And become brothers and would Tell Naruto about kurama past and his father six path of Sage and it would be cool if Naruto And Madara meet Uzumaki Saviors and it will be good if Naruto would use sub elements Bloodline well as wood Release and sharingan and I Wonder if this is Naruto And Hinata pairs? And please keep itachi and Mikoto and shisui and Madara and third Hokage alive in this Story.
Wonder if there would be Bashing in this Story?
Civilians concil Bashing and Fugaku Bashing and sakura Bashing the sasuke Bashing.
I wish you good luck with Re-writing this story and if you want help please contact me I'll give you some amazing ideas ok
10/17/2015 c2 Hashirama 1710
I like it
12/27/2014 c1 ChunkyFunkyMunky
This seems pretty interesting. I'm a fan of strong Naruto, sometimes godly, but I got confused with Madara just waltzing in and having permission to take Naruto. It could use some more details in the first chapter, but I'm still eager for the next chapter.
12/23/2014 c2 TheOnlyKing
No offense, but this is garbage. You don't have enough detail and the relationships are too rushed, it's also unrealistic since Hiruzen would never let Madara take away Naruto. Also seriously? There's no way anybody would've ever believed that Naruto was Madara's and Hashirama's grandson, In fact Danzo would have never let that happen and would've immediately questioned Madara's motives as well as proof of Naruto's lineage.

Besides, didn't he get raised by Madara? He should be calm and composed instead of yelling and making himself look like a fool.

The most stupid thing(besides you spelling counsel wrong) is that people were more surprised about Naruto's lineage rather than the fact that Madara was alive when he should've been dead for years, and nobody even asked how he survived!

This must've been written by a ten year old with minimal knowledge of the shinobi world and the anime 'Naruto' as well as someone who never learned how to spell.

*sigh* complete and utter garbage.
8/15/2014 c2 mattcun
plz write more

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