
7/17/2014 c4 EmeraldGrey123
Aw, I think Hermione and Ron will make good friends with Darco, and then Draco when he comes back :)
Just one thing to say, I don't know if you wrote this accidentally but Hermione doesn't have red hair, she has brown hair :)
Aw, I think Hermione and Ron will make good friends with Darco, and then Draco when he comes back :)
Just one thing to say, I don't know if you wrote this accidentally but Hermione doesn't have red hair, she has brown hair :)
7/15/2014 c1 EmeraldGrey123
Thank you so, so much for writing the speech on separate lines this time, it made it so much easier to read and I was able to properly enjoy the story :)
It sounds really good so far, I like the idea of the new character that's a mixture of both of them. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Thank you so, so much for writing the speech on separate lines this time, it made it so much easier to read and I was able to properly enjoy the story :)
It sounds really good so far, I like the idea of the new character that's a mixture of both of them. I can't wait to see the next chapter!