
8/1/2015 c3
5daughterbringsthewater
It's too bad that this didn't get updated again, it's really good!

It's too bad that this didn't get updated again, it's really good!
7/23/2014 c1
58ChocolateTeapot
Nice work! This story flows really well, it does a great job at capturing the atmosphere and the dialogue is excellent too. The main character seems interesting and quite likeable. I'm looking forward to see how this continues.

Nice work! This story flows really well, it does a great job at capturing the atmosphere and the dialogue is excellent too. The main character seems interesting and quite likeable. I'm looking forward to see how this continues.
7/20/2014 c1 Guest
Enjoyed what I read so far, interested to see where this goes.
Enjoyed what I read so far, interested to see where this goes.