for Eyes of the Fox10/10/2016 c2 anoneme
Interesting start.
Interesting start.
1/3/2015 c2 Boulevard-of-The-Unbreakable
Oh this is so cute I hope you're still writing it
Update soon please
Oh this is so cute I hope you're still writing it
Update soon please
9/22/2014 c1 
11Hiiraeth
While I like the concept, I do have some trouble believing Sandaime would allow a 14 year old boy adopt a baby
11HiiraethWhile I like the concept, I do have some trouble believing Sandaime would allow a 14 year old boy adopt a baby
9/20/2014 c1 Guest
Anko would be 12 years old at this point, she is not even a chunin or perhaps a rookie chunin, what is she doing there. At least Kakashi is 15 years old and a Jonin for 3 years. Plrase sort this out. also Kakashi still should have PTSD.
Anko would be 12 years old at this point, she is not even a chunin or perhaps a rookie chunin, what is she doing there. At least Kakashi is 15 years old and a Jonin for 3 years. Plrase sort this out. also Kakashi still should have PTSD.
9/20/2014 c2 Senseye318
I like this style ! Kakashi father and NaruSaku keep it up !
I like this style ! Kakashi father and NaruSaku keep it up !
7/27/2014 c1 Guest
You should definitely continue, also try to make the chapters a little longer.
You should definitely continue, also try to make the chapters a little longer.
7/16/2014 c1 pikatrebond
Oooo. This could be interesting! Please continue and update soon!
Also, Sandaime Hokage-sama's name is Hiruzen. You spelled it correctly the first 2 times then said "Hirizen" and "Horizon" not sure if that is auto correct working on you or not, but I thought I'd point it out.
Oooo. This could be interesting! Please continue and update soon!
Also, Sandaime Hokage-sama's name is Hiruzen. You spelled it correctly the first 2 times then said "Hirizen" and "Horizon" not sure if that is auto correct working on you or not, but I thought I'd point it out.