for Let me bite you, I swear I will be gentle3/20/2021 c1 
21Ptool
I think this was cool. Only recommendation is formatting. Every time there is a new speaker, have a new paragraph. It is much much easier to follow that way.
For instance :
"My Isabella, you are mine yes?"
"Yes Edward yes I am yours."
Also - all punctuation with quotes - the punctuation is always *inside* the quotes, not afterwards.
So - not "Yes Edward yes". Instead, it's "Yes Edward yes."
21PtoolI think this was cool. Only recommendation is formatting. Every time there is a new speaker, have a new paragraph. It is much much easier to follow that way.
For instance :
"My Isabella, you are mine yes?"
"Yes Edward yes I am yours."
Also - all punctuation with quotes - the punctuation is always *inside* the quotes, not afterwards.
So - not "Yes Edward yes". Instead, it's "Yes Edward yes."