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3/20/2021 c1 15Ptool
I think this was cool. Only recommendation is formatting. Every time there is a new speaker, have a new paragraph. It is much much easier to follow that way.

For instance :
"My Isabella, you are mine yes?"

"Yes Edward yes I am yours."

Also - all punctuation with quotes - the punctuation is always *inside* the quotes, not afterwards.

So - not "Yes Edward yes". Instead, it's "Yes Edward yes."
5/22/2015 c1 24Camilla10
Mmm...In my mind I only can imagine a beardless Edward. But OK, this one is yours.
7/17/2014 c1 4aidan bale
Not good

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