7/13/2015 c2 Mekayla
This is a great story. I loved it.
This is a great story. I loved it.
4/18/2015 c2 Guest
Aw that was so cute! Oh wait not cute...we all know how Gilbert is too awesome to be 'cute'...suuuure.
Anyways great story!
Aw that was so cute! Oh wait not cute...we all know how Gilbert is too awesome to be 'cute'...suuuure.
Anyways great story!
4/4/2015 c2 4tridemint
Thank you for writing this. I read it, and I'm a dreadfully slow reader so it's quarter-after eleven and I still haven't gotten out of bed. Also I haven't eaten breakfast and my stomach is growling. You made me lose an hour of my life in which I could've eaten a better breakfast than I have been making for myself lately. However, it was an hour well lost. Keep writing fluff so fluffy that it kills anyone who read it. You're amazing, never forget that.
Thank you for writing this. I read it, and I'm a dreadfully slow reader so it's quarter-after eleven and I still haven't gotten out of bed. Also I haven't eaten breakfast and my stomach is growling. You made me lose an hour of my life in which I could've eaten a better breakfast than I have been making for myself lately. However, it was an hour well lost. Keep writing fluff so fluffy that it kills anyone who read it. You're amazing, never forget that.
12/3/2014 c2 120PlanetOfTheWeepingWillow
That
That
this
this thing
was amazing. No, not amazing, spectacular. Full of character. Suffocating with it. Drowning in character, mood, tone, love, passion, power, a spectacle done in two chapters. What makes it so good? People can generally relate to it. You are genuine. Something many people lack. But, also, I feel like plenty of people have felt as Gilbert did. I've felt that way. I've stupidly proclaimed my affections to several of my female friends and I felt like ramming my head into a brick wall and ordering a bull dozer over my piteous self. I've felt as destructive and horrible as he has. And that is the number one rule of having good characters: making them relatable. And you've basically made art out of it. I can't praise you enough, you've truly done something amazing here and I hope you continue on radiating brilliance. Gorgeousity made flesh, as the kids say.
Also, the cookie monster line was hilarious. Thanks for that laugh.
That
That
this
this thing
was amazing. No, not amazing, spectacular. Full of character. Suffocating with it. Drowning in character, mood, tone, love, passion, power, a spectacle done in two chapters. What makes it so good? People can generally relate to it. You are genuine. Something many people lack. But, also, I feel like plenty of people have felt as Gilbert did. I've felt that way. I've stupidly proclaimed my affections to several of my female friends and I felt like ramming my head into a brick wall and ordering a bull dozer over my piteous self. I've felt as destructive and horrible as he has. And that is the number one rule of having good characters: making them relatable. And you've basically made art out of it. I can't praise you enough, you've truly done something amazing here and I hope you continue on radiating brilliance. Gorgeousity made flesh, as the kids say.
Also, the cookie monster line was hilarious. Thanks for that laugh.
12/3/2014 c1 PlanetOfTheWeepingWillow
I may or may not have shed a few tears and fallen in love with this story.
Okay who am I kidding I did. This is the first fan fiction in a very, very long time to make me cry from just how kind and warm and loving it is. I'll review both chapters because I think you deserve plenty of reviews.
I may or may not have shed a few tears and fallen in love with this story.
Okay who am I kidding I did. This is the first fan fiction in a very, very long time to make me cry from just how kind and warm and loving it is. I'll review both chapters because I think you deserve plenty of reviews.
11/1/2014 c2 defunctaccount2017
:D How cute! The reasons were pretty funny, but IDK, Gilbert's attitude just went out the window in the second chapter. I guess he was nervous. Yeah.
:D How cute! The reasons were pretty funny, but IDK, Gilbert's attitude just went out the window in the second chapter. I guess he was nervous. Yeah.
10/18/2014 c2 17Lovethehumor101
This was very good two shot. You went into a subject that was very delicate and scary and made it into something understanding and hopeful. Thank you very much. I was very impressed. You just made my entire day. Thank you again.
This was very good two shot. You went into a subject that was very delicate and scary and made it into something understanding and hopeful. Thank you very much. I was very impressed. You just made my entire day. Thank you again.
10/2/2014 c1 6Kyle Saxon
Haha, OMG I laughed and I had feels in equal parts. I didnt noticed that he had adorable dimples haha Prussia is a kindly guy after all.
Nice two -shot!
Haha, OMG I laughed and I had feels in equal parts. I didnt noticed that he had adorable dimples haha Prussia is a kindly guy after all.
Nice two -shot!
8/6/2014 c2 1TinaFinland13
That was probably the cutest thing I've read in a really long time. The list was sooooo sweet (and totally not sappy at all) and then the confession...GAH! I just want to hug them It was just perfect!
That was probably the cutest thing I've read in a really long time. The list was sooooo sweet (and totally not sappy at all) and then the confession...GAH! I just want to hug them It was just perfect!
7/27/2014 c2 lupifer
This is so perfect, and so adorable. God, I feel like crying of fluff. I think I have a cavity now. And I hope I was right when I imagined Gil crying a bit in that one moment where his, "eyes were burning". :3 Cause for some reason it's endearing when Prussia cries in a situation like this.
This is so perfect, and so adorable. God, I feel like crying of fluff. I think I have a cavity now. And I hope I was right when I imagined Gil crying a bit in that one moment where his, "eyes were burning". :3 Cause for some reason it's endearing when Prussia cries in a situation like this.
7/24/2014 c2 3MajorFangirlInHere17
Tehehe... You have a typo. "... but I was just saying you'd be less angry if I hadn't yelled at me..."
Yeah, your welcome
Tehehe... You have a typo. "... but I was just saying you'd be less angry if I hadn't yelled at me..."
Yeah, your welcome
7/24/2014 c2 activatebird
aw! the whole thought behind their actions are to darn deep for me...but then the flipping ending cracked that wall X3
keep on writing more!
aw! the whole thought behind their actions are to darn deep for me...but then the flipping ending cracked that wall X3
keep on writing more!