for Tis The Season For Family10/1/2014 c2 Willow Edmond
An interesting chapter, I like how you're weaving in facts from RAW/Smackdown into your own world. It's pretty cool.
The only negative thing I will say is that you have multiple people talking in a paragraph and that makes the story really hard to read. You might want to try having only one person talking per paragraph. Don't worry that your paragraphs are too small, people won't care.
An interesting chapter, I like how you're weaving in facts from RAW/Smackdown into your own world. It's pretty cool.
The only negative thing I will say is that you have multiple people talking in a paragraph and that makes the story really hard to read. You might want to try having only one person talking per paragraph. Don't worry that your paragraphs are too small, people won't care.
10/1/2014 c1 Willow Edmond
Wow, interesting start here. I find myself wanting to know more about their past, how they all ended up being abandoned.
Wow, interesting start here. I find myself wanting to know more about their past, how they all ended up being abandoned.
8/29/2014 c4 
9ChocolateReignz
Yayyyy
The hounds are back
I'm sooooo happy
This was a short but really nice chapter
Loved it
9ChocolateReignzYayyyy
The hounds are back
I'm sooooo happy
This was a short but really nice chapter
Loved it
8/22/2014 c3 ChocolateReignz
Cooking n cleaning . So sweet
The gift from seth are awesome
Love it
Waiting for more
Cooking n cleaning . So sweet
The gift from seth are awesome
Love it
Waiting for more
8/20/2014 c2 ChocolateReignz
Moms do know the best.
The beat down to seth was mean but he deserved it in a way, even though he missed hi brothers n didn't wana hurt them. He could have kept the friendship
But finally they are together. Laughing n being a happy family.
Moms do know the best.
The beat down to seth was mean but he deserved it in a way, even though he missed hi brothers n didn't wana hurt them. He could have kept the friendship
But finally they are together. Laughing n being a happy family.