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11/11/2015 c6 Sassycat
I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story, the idea is creative and unusual and you execution is looking to be pretty good. On top of that you writing is good quality, you could improve but it's a great start!
Don't give up, I know what it's like to feel unrecognized. Look at it this way, you may not have a big audience but those you do enjoy your story, I know I do.
Keep writing!
11/11/2015 c6 7gamer shamer
I love the chapter! :)
11/11/2015 c6 1LADY MIRA GRAY
Oooh, is Rainpaw gonna become a medcat? Guess I'll have to find out. Can't wait for another chapter!
9/19/2015 c5 7gamer shamer
I like this story, but the names don't make much sense. Catfish isn't a name given in the clans, it's a rogue's name. Other than that, it's a great story!
3/31/2015 c4 1ApollotheSun
so, what's gonna happen to rainpaw?
tell meeeeeeeeee
3/31/2015 c3 ApollotheSun
"StarClan honors your annoyance and your loudness..." lol
3/31/2015 c2 ApollotheSun
:P
luv it.
7/20/2014 c2 Tabby
I like how you started with a battle that happened long ago, then switched to the present, and mentioned that battle in the chapter. You sound like a real author, the way you arranged that fan-fiction.
GO FIESTYFIRE!
7/20/2014 c1 Tabby
:O Nice, fiestyfire! And holy cow, STOP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS! Between you and Phaedrizzle, I'm going to blow up! :D
7/18/2014 c1 Flowerchild
Amazing story line. Can't wait to read more!
7/18/2014 c1 6ImSienablaze88DaughterOfHades
Katnissflower and Primrosepetal! LOL
Also, you have Primrosepetal twice.
Keep writing!

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