8/17/2014 c4 Tyler Schaffner
All right, I'm officially caught up with this story. I love the way you conveyed the emotions of everybody in this chapter, particularly Donnie and April and their feelings for one another. Can't wait to see what happens next.
All right, I'm officially caught up with this story. I love the way you conveyed the emotions of everybody in this chapter, particularly Donnie and April and their feelings for one another. Can't wait to see what happens next.
8/17/2014 c3 Tyler Schaffner
Okay, I finally just read this chapter all the way through. This is one of the saddest chapters of any story I've ever read. The flashback scene with April and her father was just beautiful; I can't believe he died. Onto the next chapter now.
Okay, I finally just read this chapter all the way through. This is one of the saddest chapters of any story I've ever read. The flashback scene with April and her father was just beautiful; I can't believe he died. Onto the next chapter now.
8/10/2014 c4 Guest
wale... I will definitely b waiting for the next chapter. so sad... will April ever catch a break?
wale... I will definitely b waiting for the next chapter. so sad... will April ever catch a break?
8/10/2014 c3 Guest
wow... this is getting interesting. But April's father... so sad :(
wow... this is getting interesting. But April's father... so sad :(
8/10/2014 c1 Guest
wow. interesting start. I will read more
wow. interesting start. I will read more
8/10/2014 c4 TMNT Tyrant
And the plot thickens! please update soon :)
And the plot thickens! please update soon :)
8/1/2014 c3 I Love Funny and Green Heroes
Sounds great. A little confusing because I'm not entirly sure how this relates to your oneshot. But hey, you're a good writer and I believe in you. cue the cheesy music
Sounds great. A little confusing because I'm not entirly sure how this relates to your oneshot. But hey, you're a good writer and I believe in you. cue the cheesy music
7/28/2014 c3 TMNT Tyrant
Well, what a twist! My feels! Please more
Well, what a twist! My feels! Please more
7/23/2014 c3 1ObsidianDominionDragon
Bad little plot bunny. Biting is bad. Nice plot though. Even if it gave me the feels. Time to meet up with the turtles!
JadeKurosaki
Bad little plot bunny. Biting is bad. Nice plot though. Even if it gave me the feels. Time to meet up with the turtles!
JadeKurosaki