for Dark as Snow11/16/2018 c13 wonderlandbomb
It’s funny, how I kept reading “inhale, exhale,” but I caught myself holding my breath for most of this chapter.
It’s funny, how I kept reading “inhale, exhale,” but I caught myself holding my breath for most of this chapter.
11/16/2018 c10 wonderlandbomb
Your writing has me absolutely speechless. I’m anxious. Stressed. A little disgusted because of Hans. But so impressed. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Your writing has me absolutely speechless. I’m anxious. Stressed. A little disgusted because of Hans. But so impressed. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
11/16/2018 c9 wonderlandbomb
I want so badly to be happy for Anna and Kristoff, but my anxiety over what may happen next is ruining that want.
I want so badly to be happy for Anna and Kristoff, but my anxiety over what may happen next is ruining that want.
11/16/2018 c5 wonderlandbomb
It makes me cringe how... obstinate Anna is being. How many times can you (maybe) joking say “He’ll kill me,” or “Don’t die,” to someone until it sounds less and less like a joke, and more like, I dunno, a warning? I mean, how many people have to coincidentally die around a person before it becomes suspicious, you know. Lol.
It makes me cringe how... obstinate Anna is being. How many times can you (maybe) joking say “He’ll kill me,” or “Don’t die,” to someone until it sounds less and less like a joke, and more like, I dunno, a warning? I mean, how many people have to coincidentally die around a person before it becomes suspicious, you know. Lol.
11/16/2018 c4 wonderlandbomb
Jeeeee-suhs, this story is dark. I had a feeling that Hans was gonna touch on noncon bdsm but. Yikes.
Jeeeee-suhs, this story is dark. I had a feeling that Hans was gonna touch on noncon bdsm but. Yikes.
11/16/2018 c3 wonderlandbomb
So— ignore me if this sounds crazy— but I’m thinkin’— Hans is a f*cking serial killer (and rapist) and then he’s gonna try to kill Kristoff and/or Anna. Wait no. Make that Anna and/or Kristoff.
So— ignore me if this sounds crazy— but I’m thinkin’— Hans is a f*cking serial killer (and rapist) and then he’s gonna try to kill Kristoff and/or Anna. Wait no. Make that Anna and/or Kristoff.
11/16/2018 c2 wonderlandbomb
I’m thankful that you didn’t make “it” like... repulsively detailed or something. Thank you for that. Can’t wait to read the rest. :-)
I’m thankful that you didn’t make “it” like... repulsively detailed or something. Thank you for that. Can’t wait to read the rest. :-)
11/16/2018 c1 wonderlandbomb
... Hans telling Anna how he can’t wait to teach her how to be a proper wife gave me cold sweat.
... Hans telling Anna how he can’t wait to teach her how to be a proper wife gave me cold sweat.
8/10/2018 c14 welcometothe90smrbanks
Damn this was a great story! Dark as hell (LANGUAGE!) but so good!
Damn this was a great story! Dark as hell (LANGUAGE!) but so good!
11/29/2017 c1 
2elephantskeleton
This was just amazing. As someone who was abused by my first real boyfriend/sexual partner this was kind of cathartic. The story was great and Anna seemed real. Like how a real person would react to abuse. All the other characters were great, too, of course. I've seen rape and abuse handled poorly in so much other fan fiction. It means a lot to me that you did it well. I would love to write a more full thought out review for you, once I have a little more time on my hands.
2elephantskeletonThis was just amazing. As someone who was abused by my first real boyfriend/sexual partner this was kind of cathartic. The story was great and Anna seemed real. Like how a real person would react to abuse. All the other characters were great, too, of course. I've seen rape and abuse handled poorly in so much other fan fiction. It means a lot to me that you did it well. I would love to write a more full thought out review for you, once I have a little more time on my hands.