for Son of The Hero, Son of The Queen2/10/2015 c1 
37Wolfpackersson09
I like the premise so far. I do think that this should be a harem, as each of the girls does truly care for Tsukune as they join the harem, but this is still a decent beginning.
37Wolfpackersson09I like the premise so far. I do think that this should be a harem, as each of the girls does truly care for Tsukune as they join the harem, but this is still a decent beginning.
7/22/2014 c1 inactive126790
Alright:) nice job, lots of description. I'm glad you posted it. The semen line irked me a bit but what can you do. It held interest.
Alright:) nice job, lots of description. I'm glad you posted it. The semen line irked me a bit but what can you do. It held interest.
7/22/2014 c1 16Duesal Bladesinger
Hmmm... Duncan, I tried to read, I really did, but I just couldn't after Tskune said:
"So you are a vampire? Aren't you going to drag me to some place drain my blood and semen?"
Yeah... As a warning, most readers don't like to hear this kind of stuff outside of a lemon.
16Duesal BladesingerHmmm... Duncan, I tried to read, I really did, but I just couldn't after Tskune said:
"So you are a vampire? Aren't you going to drag me to some place drain my blood and semen?"
Yeah... As a warning, most readers don't like to hear this kind of stuff outside of a lemon.
7/22/2014 c1 Guest
Wow! This was GREAT. You nailed the characters and I loved all the details.
Wow! This was GREAT. You nailed the characters and I loved all the details.