
12/11/2024 c5 pincho
I'm done. Just can't get into which for me is sad as a lot of reviews like it.
Too much is forced for me in the plot so far. The royal ward is more believable than the Malfoy scenes so far. That just kills a story for me. It reminds me of a story where the author tried to convince the readers that Lucious really wasn't a death eater nut and that it was all his wife's fault, even after the author states that he murdered his first born just because it was female.
I'm done. Just can't get into which for me is sad as a lot of reviews like it.
Too much is forced for me in the plot so far. The royal ward is more believable than the Malfoy scenes so far. That just kills a story for me. It reminds me of a story where the author tried to convince the readers that Lucious really wasn't a death eater nut and that it was all his wife's fault, even after the author states that he murdered his first born just because it was female.
12/11/2024 c5 pincho
Damn i had hopes. And really, even Mudblood children didn't deserve to be abused. Narcissa the wife of a death eater thinks such things?
Yes I am someone who does not believe in Malfoy (of any type) redemption. That goes quadruple for Snape.
Damn i had hopes. And really, even Mudblood children didn't deserve to be abused. Narcissa the wife of a death eater thinks such things?
Yes I am someone who does not believe in Malfoy (of any type) redemption. That goes quadruple for Snape.
12/11/2024 c2 pincho
I'm going to keep reading but so far I'm not impressed.
Let's say that magic is the reason why they keep Harry there, it doesn't explain the shit of effort that goes into his care as a "royal ward". So far it's just another grooming fic just like canon but instead of Dumbledore and Hagrid it's the Queen and her muggleborn.
I'm going to keep reading but so far I'm not impressed.
Let's say that magic is the reason why they keep Harry there, it doesn't explain the shit of effort that goes into his care as a "royal ward". So far it's just another grooming fic just like canon but instead of Dumbledore and Hagrid it's the Queen and her muggleborn.
12/11/2024 c1 pincho
So the government guy just leaves for a week with "hope"...
I always find it cute when authors believe that a blood centric world is open to same-sex love. Continuity of a family requires a male and female with blood related children, a society that revolves around this is not open minded.
There was a story that while not great (the story line and characters) had an awsome reason for acceptance. Magical blood adoption was a thing and accepted, so you could have a same sex marriage and still get the blood related child through adoption as the ritual literally changed their dna.
So the government guy just leaves for a week with "hope"...
I always find it cute when authors believe that a blood centric world is open to same-sex love. Continuity of a family requires a male and female with blood related children, a society that revolves around this is not open minded.
There was a story that while not great (the story line and characters) had an awsome reason for acceptance. Magical blood adoption was a thing and accepted, so you could have a same sex marriage and still get the blood related child through adoption as the ritual literally changed their dna.
12/10/2024 c1 pincho
Ok so I've only gotten a few paragraphs in and I'm completely baffled...why would any authority figure send a child back to a home where they were locked into a cupboard? It's not like it wasn't obvious Harry lived in it. Then it's even more obvious his abuse once he is in front of the queen then even more so when just a few days later a rep shows up and his ass is still in the cupboard.
Ok so I've only gotten a few paragraphs in and I'm completely baffled...why would any authority figure send a child back to a home where they were locked into a cupboard? It's not like it wasn't obvious Harry lived in it. Then it's even more obvious his abuse once he is in front of the queen then even more so when just a few days later a rep shows up and his ass is still in the cupboard.
11/21/2024 c65 Guest
This is definitely one of my favorites now. A bit sad its going to end. Evem if it would just be normal interactions for now I wouldn't mind a slice of life and seeing how Harry and Hermione might get together. Though I imagine it would take considerable work to deal with the classes and such and would be too much for 7 years of normal school. Even if attempted as a tv series in text doing episodic bits.
This is definitely one of my favorites now. A bit sad its going to end. Evem if it would just be normal interactions for now I wouldn't mind a slice of life and seeing how Harry and Hermione might get together. Though I imagine it would take considerable work to deal with the classes and such and would be too much for 7 years of normal school. Even if attempted as a tv series in text doing episodic bits.
11/20/2024 c45 Guest
Fantastic work and very detailed in a good way. If there's any details it's usually an info dump not like this usually.
Fantastic work and very detailed in a good way. If there's any details it's usually an info dump not like this usually.
11/20/2024 c44 Guest
So very well done.
So very well done.
11/20/2024 c43 Guest
Rather sad this was the last story made. Definitely one of the better stories I've come across on top of being fairly unique.
Rather sad this was the last story made. Definitely one of the better stories I've come across on top of being fairly unique.
11/20/2024 c40 Guest
Wonderful story. Looking like it will be over before he even gets to the school. Was hoping he may meet Luna early through the Weasleys or something first year. Also him meeting Hermione and Neville befriending them right away. Looks like it may not get that far.
Also re-realized there were some rather good movies back then to watch that Harry and the others could watch that would also wow them and get them thinking of possibilities. Looked up famous movies before 91.
Wonderful story. Looking like it will be over before he even gets to the school. Was hoping he may meet Luna early through the Weasleys or something first year. Also him meeting Hermione and Neville befriending them right away. Looks like it may not get that far.
Also re-realized there were some rather good movies back then to watch that Harry and the others could watch that would also wow them and get them thinking of possibilities. Looked up famous movies before 91.
11/20/2024 c33 Guest
Wonderfully done. Love the locket especially.
Wonderfully done. Love the locket especially.
11/20/2024 c27 Guest
Wow.
Wow.