
7/21/2017 c14
15EmeraldKhanate
I've read through this multiple times and I love every bit of it. The characterization is spot on and all the plot twists and cliffhangers are engaging and interesting. I hope you update some day

I've read through this multiple times and I love every bit of it. The characterization is spot on and all the plot twists and cliffhangers are engaging and interesting. I hope you update some day
1/26/2015 c14
16mashamallows
If you do not update, I will find you, I will torture you and then I will kill you, if you aren't already dead. So my point is: UPDATE!

If you do not update, I will find you, I will torture you and then I will kill you, if you aren't already dead. So my point is: UPDATE!
8/17/2014 c13
6Shawn Raven
Oh poor Anna!
Those ducks were cute in the First Time in Forever sequence..but not anymore.
That ranger and his dark humour, hmph!

Oh poor Anna!
Those ducks were cute in the First Time in Forever sequence..but not anymore.
That ranger and his dark humour, hmph!
8/9/2014 c9 Guest
Very nice and just like I you need a beta because you quite the few errors
Very nice and just like I you need a beta because you quite the few errors
8/8/2014 c9 Shawn Raven
OHHHHHHHH!
Snow Elsa huh?
I knew Elsa would always have a plan up her icy sleeves. :)
OHHHHHHHH!
Snow Elsa huh?
I knew Elsa would always have a plan up her icy sleeves. :)
8/1/2014 c8 Guest
I really like the update made a snow Elsa didn't she?
I really like the update made a snow Elsa didn't she?
8/1/2014 c8 NrDg
Oh no, a cliffy. Of course Elsa can't be dead but I am curious to see what she is up to.
I like how you are showing the development of the characters in this story. I am enjoying reading the story and look forward to more.
Oh no, a cliffy. Of course Elsa can't be dead but I am curious to see what she is up to.
I like how you are showing the development of the characters in this story. I am enjoying reading the story and look forward to more.
7/30/2014 c6
2CrunchDeNumbers
Very interesting premise. I like the way you've given some thought to the way magic works.

Very interesting premise. I like the way you've given some thought to the way magic works.
7/29/2014 c5
16mashamallows
OMG! I love it! But one little request: more Elsa less Anna please :) Update soon! And if you want I can BETA it for you! I would be happy to help :D

OMG! I love it! But one little request: more Elsa less Anna please :) Update soon! And if you want I can BETA it for you! I would be happy to help :D
7/23/2014 c1
3against a sea of troubles
Hmmmmm interesting. I'll follow along. You might want to check out your intro though. There are a few typos you may want to fix. You should get a few more readers then.

Hmmmmm interesting. I'll follow along. You might want to check out your intro though. There are a few typos you may want to fix. You should get a few more readers then.