for Worth It?10/23/2020 c19 Solarfairy
This made me late logging into my work pc this morning, so gripping I read it in one sitting! Amazing work :)
This made me late logging into my work pc this morning, so gripping I read it in one sitting! Amazing work :)
9/13/2016 c20 Mickiecuteknight
Loved this story. Is the sequel up? I didn't see it and I would really love to read it.
Loved this story. Is the sequel up? I didn't see it and I would really love to read it.
4/5/2015 c14 kateokay
q 1 no
q2 stay away
qu 3 nah
q 1 no
q2 stay away
qu 3 nah
1/29/2015 c19 
2Emilyjayden101
This stort was very heartbreaking and sad but oh so amazing. I loved it. I loved how in the first chapter you had the Hood kidnap/ take Alan with him in the bank, i loved that simple change to the story, I am surprized I didn't ever think about that. Please, please do the sequel. It was so good, and it looks like the Hood is going to be back for Alan again, and now that all the Tracy's are as tight as ever it will make an extremelly great story. Hope to see the sequel soon! :D
2Emilyjayden101This stort was very heartbreaking and sad but oh so amazing. I loved it. I loved how in the first chapter you had the Hood kidnap/ take Alan with him in the bank, i loved that simple change to the story, I am surprized I didn't ever think about that. Please, please do the sequel. It was so good, and it looks like the Hood is going to be back for Alan again, and now that all the Tracy's are as tight as ever it will make an extremelly great story. Hope to see the sequel soon! :D
12/11/2014 c19 Guest
More please xx
More please xx
12/11/2014 c19 OceanBlueSpirit
I'm sad to see this story go, I loved reading it and I'm going to miss it. :( But I am looking forward to the sequel, I don't have any ideas to give you right now I'm afraid, but I'll let you know if anything comes to mind. If not I look forward to seeing what you come up with, I'm sure it will be brilliant just like this story was.
Great last chapter, it was nice to see Alan enjoying spending time with his family and thinking about his future, but the ending with The Hood was daunting. He's going to cause trouble again for sure isn't he.
That could be an idea, Alan is now getting better and things are going well, then The Hood comes back and Alan has a relapse of cutting himself but feels so ashamed of what's he's doing again that he tries to keep it from his family and tries to stop, but eventually all of the trying gets to him and he can't do it anymore. He either has a breakdown again, this time it could be he ends up in like a catatonic state, in which his brain is trying to deal with all the trauma happening and so it shuts his body down for a little bit, or he tells somebody what's happening, like Virgil and has a breakdown in front of him when he thinks Virgil is angry with him. His father could be so wrapped up in the whole Hood mess that he starts to forget about Alan again while trying to protect him, and his brothers have to bring him back to Alan somehow, if its not too late, maybe Alan is fed up of waiting for his father, thinks that what happened in this story, his father coming back to him, was just a fluke. Something like that.
There could be a huge showdown with The Hood where he tricks Alan through his mind into trying to kill himself again, I don't know what he tricks him with but somehow, but this time in front of his family and they talk to Alan and with their words and memories of things, helping Alan to remember the happy times and how they all care about him, things like this, while watching Alan dragging a knife against his wrists over and over again because The Hood is commanding him to do it, but eventually they bring Alan back to them and break The Hood's connection with his mind and he stops cutting himself, crying because he was finally able to stop hurting himself.
I didn't expect to write so much, but there you go. See what you think, you don't have to use any of it if you don't want to. I just came up with it now. :) xxx
I'm sad to see this story go, I loved reading it and I'm going to miss it. :( But I am looking forward to the sequel, I don't have any ideas to give you right now I'm afraid, but I'll let you know if anything comes to mind. If not I look forward to seeing what you come up with, I'm sure it will be brilliant just like this story was.
Great last chapter, it was nice to see Alan enjoying spending time with his family and thinking about his future, but the ending with The Hood was daunting. He's going to cause trouble again for sure isn't he.
That could be an idea, Alan is now getting better and things are going well, then The Hood comes back and Alan has a relapse of cutting himself but feels so ashamed of what's he's doing again that he tries to keep it from his family and tries to stop, but eventually all of the trying gets to him and he can't do it anymore. He either has a breakdown again, this time it could be he ends up in like a catatonic state, in which his brain is trying to deal with all the trauma happening and so it shuts his body down for a little bit, or he tells somebody what's happening, like Virgil and has a breakdown in front of him when he thinks Virgil is angry with him. His father could be so wrapped up in the whole Hood mess that he starts to forget about Alan again while trying to protect him, and his brothers have to bring him back to Alan somehow, if its not too late, maybe Alan is fed up of waiting for his father, thinks that what happened in this story, his father coming back to him, was just a fluke. Something like that.
There could be a huge showdown with The Hood where he tricks Alan through his mind into trying to kill himself again, I don't know what he tricks him with but somehow, but this time in front of his family and they talk to Alan and with their words and memories of things, helping Alan to remember the happy times and how they all care about him, things like this, while watching Alan dragging a knife against his wrists over and over again because The Hood is commanding him to do it, but eventually they bring Alan back to them and break The Hood's connection with his mind and he stops cutting himself, crying because he was finally able to stop hurting himself.
I didn't expect to write so much, but there you go. See what you think, you don't have to use any of it if you don't want to. I just came up with it now. :) xxx
12/11/2014 c19 4kattfan12001
So what will lady p do...with the hood excape. ...I would like to see what you do with the squeal.
4kattfan12001So what will lady p do...with the hood excape. ...I would like to see what you do with the squeal.
11/30/2014 c18 OceanBlueSpirit
And just like that the moment is gone. Jeff is back to his old ways of pushing Alan aside and putting international rescue before his son. Seriously what is that guy's problem? And what about the others, Virgil agreeing with Jeff! I hope that if he goes back to school he gets worse and eventually they all realise that international rescue is more important and Alan isn't 'healed' just because they all had a talk and aired their feelings. Jeff is thinking that this is all over when it's far from that. I would have liked to have seen Alan continue climbing until he was on the roof, see what would have happened. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. :) xx
And just like that the moment is gone. Jeff is back to his old ways of pushing Alan aside and putting international rescue before his son. Seriously what is that guy's problem? And what about the others, Virgil agreeing with Jeff! I hope that if he goes back to school he gets worse and eventually they all realise that international rescue is more important and Alan isn't 'healed' just because they all had a talk and aired their feelings. Jeff is thinking that this is all over when it's far from that. I would have liked to have seen Alan continue climbing until he was on the roof, see what would have happened. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. :) xx
11/21/2014 c17 AlexandriaClare
Love your story
And I was wondering if you're okay with writing a companion piece to this story.
In it you could mention that night when Alan first started cutting, when he heard John, Gordon and Scott talking about him ( the one u mentioned in your latest chapter). So maybe you could tell what they were saying about him that upset him so much
Love your story
And I was wondering if you're okay with writing a companion piece to this story.
In it you could mention that night when Alan first started cutting, when he heard John, Gordon and Scott talking about him ( the one u mentioned in your latest chapter). So maybe you could tell what they were saying about him that upset him so much