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12/26/2014 c5 7Cobalt027
I wonder how Naruto will act when he finds out about Gin. Will it be like friends? Or rival alphas? Or maybe it will be like brothers.
Anyways this was a good story so far, and I can not wait for the next chapter.
12/23/2014 c5 Guest
Sasuke could be a kit sunk they have fire and illusions and some do have lightning
12/21/2014 c1 Mii-chandechuuu
About Embracing your Inner Demon: I get you, finding inspiration is hard well here are some tips from me, take them or leave them is your choice x):
1: Read a lot (mostly about topics related to your story, everything! Inform yourself, fill your head with a vast knowledge!)
2: Focus on the feelings of each character (the more you understand them, the easier you'll find a way to make them a clear path and plot in your story and eventually they'll come alive in your head)
3: Never lose the main idea of the story (of course the story will be evolving each chapter but you must have the end of it clearly or you'll get lost in all the possible doors leading to a new adventure)
4: Take a short break (don't waste all your ideas in a single chapter or in 5, split those ideas, put them in order in your head; see it as if they're a puzzle you have to solve to find the right answer)
5: Read your story over and over again (if you love the way it is, you'll stop or maybe you'll inspire yourself and say: "I like the way this is going, i'll add something more...". If you don't like it, there's the option of remake and check tip no.4.)
6: Have fun, enjoy your story and give it a good finale that best suits you and the characters according to tip 2 and 3.

That's all i have to say, i love your stories keep on them but take your time, take it easy :D
12/19/2014 c5 Metroidling
Awesome story
12/1/2014 c4 Guest
I'm sorry I'm confused...What happend between Tsukune and Omotes fight for Kurumi to think he's her destined one?
11/17/2014 c5 Kmaster
great chapter, update soon
10/30/2014 c5 BoomOnGames
Good story really looking forward to seeing future updates to the story
10/30/2014 c4 BoomOnGames
Good story really looking forward to future chapters and seeing how the story unfolds
10/28/2014 c5 DarkPirateKing69
just remember that you introduced him as an assassin in the first chapter.. so maybe some situation in the near future when he actually has to use those skills again. possibly with audience or at least Ura should be witnessing that. i don't mean it as a way to create friction between them, but something to bind over.
10/28/2014 c4 DarkPirateKing69
i first thought that it was super lame that Naruto charmed like a chump.. but i just assume that you made the kiss into something more absolute, even when it comes to S-class monsters.
10/28/2014 c3 DarkPirateKing69
i definitely won't mind if you just skim over over most of the small canon incidents (like with Saizo).. if they are pretty much the same that is, obviously. no need to waste words by reciting canon with some negligible differences.
10/28/2014 c2 DarkPirateKing69
i personally care about the whole Sasuke thing.. as long as it's more like a friendly rivalry and not the obsessive and irrational kind from his part.. and they should be more or less equal. otherwise it inevitably goes the route that canon and i'm not the biggest fan of his irrational and obsessive inferiority/superiority complex.
10/28/2014 c1 DarkPirateKing69
it would be cool if Naruto was student of Touhou Fuhai.. or at least learned something from the guy. i thinnk the reason why there aren't many werewolf stories, is bcoz despite being strong, they don't have any 'cool' powers, outside of pure physical ability.. well, as far as i remember.. maybe they had regeneration or something. it has been quite a while since i read the first season.
10/18/2014 c5 googhoter
Good continue the story
9/23/2014 c1 Guest
Make his powers like Bigby wolf
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